3 Replies to “Kelsey the perfect human”

  1. Rules?
    Went well.
    Favorite part?
    Shift in tone when the perfect human bled out and the captions go up
    Reshoot?
    Not necessarily, felt narratively satisfying
    Well paced?
    Parts felt kind of long but was consistent

  2. 1. Most/all rules were followed through the video
    2. The blood pour was morbid but it was definitely a good addition to the film
    3. Maybe reshoot the speaking part… I think the film would benefit from having the lips match the subtitles
    4. Some of the shots were a bit long, but I think it worked pretty well in this case.

  3. 1. Rules were followed throughout the video.
    2. I like the shot of the blood being poured onto the food/plate.
    3. I would probably reshoot the beginning and use actual fake blood.
    4. Some of the shots that were longer worked, so I would say it was well paced.

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