3 Replies to “The Perfect Inhuman: Payton Hostetler”

  1. Rules?
    Incredible rule following, with a unique narrative
    Favorite Part?
    The darker narration shift at the end
    Reshoot?
    Final shot maybe, just a shot of the back felt like it was taking away from the narration
    Paced well?
    Pacing felt completely natural

  2. You included the rules very well. I enjoyed the fisheye shot and the shot of the food. I thought that was a different shot. I think it was passed really well and kept the viewer’s attention. Very good job!

  3. 1. The rules were followed effectively
    2. I liked the ending where it slowly zoomed in and the narration became distorted.
    3. The only thing I would change would be the color of the title cards, I would probably make them black or white.
    4. The video/short was paced well.

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