Whose film Lauren
Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
Yes
What was your favorite part of the video?
I actually really like the night time shots outside
What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?
I would have to say the lighting, I also would have had your subject actually write words
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
Yes, the creative choices kept me intrigued
Whose Film: Lauren
Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
– 2 or more actors, indoor and outdoor
What was your favorite part of the video?
– I liked the voiceover and the change in settings.
What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
– I would reshoot the outside night scenes.
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
– Well paced with good commentary.
Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?:
– Yes
What was your favorite part of the video?
– I liked all the different camera angles and the different settings
What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
– The video quality is kinda bad when its outside
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
– Yes, it was paced well
The rules were followed nicely. I like the use and the audio, and I also like that it is in color. I also like how there is more than one person in the film. A transition between some scenes could benefit the video. The video was well-paced.
Executed obstructions just fine. It was an interesting interpretation with interesting choices. The voice over was cool. I liked it – good job.
I liked the last shot of the steps. Camera man never moved. I almost wish for a couple of the shots where the dialogue talks about the human moving left/right closer/farther away that the camera man was in the same position for those. Overall though, great job filming!
I liked the dialogue and the voice that you chose. It worked.
The rules were followed effectively. I enjoyed the overall effect of the video. I would reshoot where there isn’t white spots of light reflecting. The video was a good length and wasn’t too short or long.
-The video followed the rules
-I like the cinematic feel to it, whether it was the video format or the frames, it felt like I was watching a short film
-Some background elements in the video were a little distracting, like the black space we talked about
-The video was paced well
This movie was very similar to the video examples that were posted of the dogma 65 movies. Even though the quality that gives the movie that effect might have been an accident but it worked in this case.
My favorite part was when the perfect human was walking at night and both the walking away and walking towards the camera was filmed and repeated.
Were the rules of the obstruction followed effectively?
– Yes. I liked the new dialogue, especially the ending about how everyone is perfect
What was your favorite part of the video?
– Either the scene walking toward and away from you, or the scene on the stairs
What would you reshoot, reedit, etc.?
– Aside from adding a bit more dialogue during the walking scene, I wouldn’t change anything else
Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or short
– The video is very well paced. The repeated shots, as well as close up repeated shots, are really well used.
Whose film Lauren
Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
Yes
What was your favorite part of the video?
I actually really like the night time shots outside
What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?
I would have to say the lighting, I also would have had your subject actually write words
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
Yes, the creative choices kept me intrigued
Whose Film: Lauren
Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
– 2 or more actors, indoor and outdoor
What was your favorite part of the video?
– I liked the voiceover and the change in settings.
What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
– I would reshoot the outside night scenes.
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
– Well paced with good commentary.
Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?:
– Yes
What was your favorite part of the video?
– I liked all the different camera angles and the different settings
What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
– The video quality is kinda bad when its outside
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
– Yes, it was paced well
The rules were followed nicely. I like the use and the audio, and I also like that it is in color. I also like how there is more than one person in the film. A transition between some scenes could benefit the video. The video was well-paced.
Executed obstructions just fine. It was an interesting interpretation with interesting choices. The voice over was cool. I liked it – good job.
I liked the last shot of the steps. Camera man never moved. I almost wish for a couple of the shots where the dialogue talks about the human moving left/right closer/farther away that the camera man was in the same position for those. Overall though, great job filming!
I liked the dialogue and the voice that you chose. It worked.
The rules were followed effectively. I enjoyed the overall effect of the video. I would reshoot where there isn’t white spots of light reflecting. The video was a good length and wasn’t too short or long.
-The video followed the rules
-I like the cinematic feel to it, whether it was the video format or the frames, it felt like I was watching a short film
-Some background elements in the video were a little distracting, like the black space we talked about
-The video was paced well
This movie was very similar to the video examples that were posted of the dogma 65 movies. Even though the quality that gives the movie that effect might have been an accident but it worked in this case.
My favorite part was when the perfect human was walking at night and both the walking away and walking towards the camera was filmed and repeated.
Were the rules of the obstruction followed effectively?
– Yes. I liked the new dialogue, especially the ending about how everyone is perfect
What was your favorite part of the video?
– Either the scene walking toward and away from you, or the scene on the stairs
What would you reshoot, reedit, etc.?
– Aside from adding a bit more dialogue during the walking scene, I wouldn’t change anything else
Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or short
– The video is very well paced. The repeated shots, as well as close up repeated shots, are really well used.