Rules followed effectively?
They were followed in a way that didn’t seem obvious and I appreciate that.
Favorite part?
Pog face after the turkeys
Reshoot re-edit?
Long silence parts
Paced well?
Felt a little long during silence parts as mentioned in class.
1. The rules seemed to be followed all throughout
2. I loved the slow pan to the ecu of your face
3. I would consider reshooting the animal part.. maybe get some additional angles or close ups
4. Some of the shots hung on for a bit too long, but that can be an artistic choice, so it’s completely up to you and how you want to present the shots.
The rules were followed well, and I like how you chose to say food instead of showing actual food. I like the nature shots, but you could shorten them and add more things referencing the perfect human.
1. The rules were followed well
2. I like the shots where you are walking in and out of frame showing the “director”
3. I would probably reshoot the shots of the landscapes and have something going in them that relates to the perfect human.
4. The short was paced well sometimes and sometimes it was not. A couple of shots lasted a little bit too long.
Rules followed effectively?
They were followed in a way that didn’t seem obvious and I appreciate that.
Favorite part?
Pog face after the turkeys
Reshoot re-edit?
Long silence parts
Paced well?
Felt a little long during silence parts as mentioned in class.
1. The rules seemed to be followed all throughout
2. I loved the slow pan to the ecu of your face
3. I would consider reshooting the animal part.. maybe get some additional angles or close ups
4. Some of the shots hung on for a bit too long, but that can be an artistic choice, so it’s completely up to you and how you want to present the shots.
The rules were followed well, and I like how you chose to say food instead of showing actual food. I like the nature shots, but you could shorten them and add more things referencing the perfect human.
1. The rules were followed well
2. I like the shots where you are walking in and out of frame showing the “director”
3. I would probably reshoot the shots of the landscapes and have something going in them that relates to the perfect human.
4. The short was paced well sometimes and sometimes it was not. A couple of shots lasted a little bit too long.