The single page website I choose to critique is called Echo. According to onepagelove.com, Echo is a public relations agency that tries to connect their clients with the people they want to reach. “Echo amplifies brands and businesses”. I chose to critique this single page website because it’s opening image which was somewhat like an illusion, was pretty cool. The use of colors and illusions stuck out to me the most.
The navigation for the page was easy. It scrolls down to about three different “sections”. So the website is pretty short and stops abruptly. The layout and composition was simply plain. But it was too plain! At first glance, I thought the simplicity made it elegant but when I started to scroll down, I just realized it had more of an incomplete look. There was way too much negative and free space. I think this issue could have been fixed if there were some columns added here or there. There’s a “knob” on the upper right side of the opening page. The knob makes you want to click on it and drag it right, thinking you’ll unlock something but it actually doesn’t work. The fact that it doesn’t work makes me question if it even is a knob. The links on the website do not work as well.
The use of color was black, white and an off white almost gray. My opinion of the creator picking these colors was that they just tried to play it safe. If Echo is meant to “amplify brands and businesses” then why doesn’t their website portray that same excitement? I think one way of fixing this would be to add a pop of color here or there. I would suggest red because it’s an exciting color and it will combine nicely with the black and white colors previously used. According to The principles of Beautiful Web Design: Chapter 2: Color, the color red can be perceived as the color of passion and excitement. So I think having a pop of it in the original design would be good.
The chapter also states that the color white can be perceived among viewers as perfection, light and purity. However when I visited the page, I didn’t receive any of those thoughts from the web creator’s use of white. I just got a feeling of empty space. And the black text up against the white background didn’t bring anything special either. Now the color black can be perceived as power, elegance, and strength. I did get a hint of this feeling when the white text was up against the black background. In my opinion, it gave that section of context a bold statement. The font wasn’t special or fancy. However, it was used in two different colors (black and off white). The font isn’t really pleasing and the size is too big.
The chapter about texture doesn’t really apply to this website. There was no repeated pattern. The viewer cant feel roughness or smoothness. There wasn’t really any proportions because the website didn’t have much of a layout. The only thing that I would say had emphasis was the picture, I assume, of the creator. But even then it was pretty simple because it had a thin black border around the circle that held the image.
The only thing that I found interesting about this website was the opening page where it had an illusion where the text would slowly disappear and then reappear as you scrolled down. The text, ECHO, was put behind a black and white stripped layout so it looked like it was moving. It’s one of those illusions where if you look at it too long it will start to hurt your eyes. Most viewers would find this a bad element to have on a website but I found it quite exciting considering everything was pretty bland.