9 Replies to “Perfect Human – Hannah Williams”

  1. Whose Film: Hannah
    Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
    Saturation and outside
    What was your favorite part of the video?
    – I liked the music paired with the voiceover
    What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
    – I would reshoot the jumping scene
    Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
    – I think it was paced well

  2. The rules were followed. My favorite part was the ending with your hands. I feel like the part of you walking was too long but the rest of the video was paced well. Good work!

  3. The rules were followed effectively. My favorite part of the video overall is the filter on the movie. I feel as if the saturation adds an effect to the plot of the video. I would reshoot the outside parts where you can hear the wind in the background possibly. The video was paced well and didn’t feel tool short.

  4. Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?:
    – Yes
    What was your favorite part of the video?
    – The music stopping and walking away into the distance
    What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
    – Add the music back in after that section
    Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
    – The ending was a little long

  5. The rules were done nicely. My favorite part was the repetition. I wish another person were involved to be a character or help record. I also think it would be cool if it were black and white. I wish there were more emotions. The video was paced well and easy to follow.

  6. Whose film Hannah
    Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
    Yes

    What was your favorite part of the video?
    The saturation makes it look different from everyone else’s

    What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?
    If possible, try to have someone else in the video so you yourself could shoot it

    Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
    No I dont think its paced well…all the shots feel super long

  7. I think the saturation filter was a hard rule. Perhaps if the contrast was decreased a bit it would help with visibility? Maybe not.
    I liked the dialogue outside as well.

  8. Well done. I love the part where the music stops it worked really well just leaving it to the natural noise. Filter is cool too. Overall nice job.

  9. -The rules were followed
    -I like the change of scenery, you made the saturation filter worked out well
    -If anything I would choose to edit, It would be the use of the walking long shot as an ending
    -I think that the pacing of the video is fine, nothing to complain about

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