^Version according to rules ^ (rules: 1. must film each shot in one take, 2. cannot film yourself, 3. can only have narration, no music or any other audio, 4. no one can blink throughout the whole film, and 5. must film everything upside down.)
^Version against some rules ^ (w/ music)
1. Nice job with all the rules
2. I liked the shots of the sky— I think the inverted colors worked really well for this shot and it adds to the film’s impact.
3. There isn’t really anything I noticed that really needed changed… I think the shots and edits worked for what you were going for.
4. The video was paced extremely well.. no shot stuck around too long and you were able to keep the energy up the whole time
1. Nice job following all the rules throughout
2. I loved the toilet shot… it has a very film noir look, it’s soft, inviting, and has a great composition.
3. I think each shot worked really well… the edits and clips were all extremely intentional with great nuance.
4. The pacing worked great throughout— the video was engaging and interesting from start to finish.