Ames' syllabi

Yes the rules were followed

I think the music fits well with the video

The text in between the shots, just make it longer so its easier to read

It was placed well, make the text clips longer

The rules were followed

I like the simplicity of the video

The video should be a bit longer

I think the video was placed well, just add more

1. The rules were followed noticeably and effectively
2. My favorite part was that it was intended to feel like a modern take and like a TikTok, that was fully readable and it definitely felt like a TikTok. It was really well done!
3. I wouldn’t change anything!
4. The video was paced very well!

The rules were followed

I like the different perspectives

I would add a little more movement

The video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

1. The rules were followed noticeably and effectively
2. My favorite part was that he forgot his blue folder at the very end. Though it was probably unintentional, it adds that aspect of although being a perfect student, mistakes happen. It adds to the film. Overall, I enjoyed the film and it was well done.
3. I would not really change anything that Gaige did
4. The video was paced well; some parts felt a bit long like the homework scene but other than that it was good!

The rules were followed 

I like the different camera angles and different shots

At the end maybe add a little more of internal dialogue

The video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

The rules were followed

I like how you incorporated multiple camera angles

I would re-record the him opening the computer

I think the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

1. They were followed noticeably and effectively
2. My favorite part was the dancing, the flapping, and then the falling. It was funny and entertaining
3. I wouldn’t change anything about what Sid did, it was very entertaining and well done!
4. The video was paced well. Some parts felt a little long, like the reading section, but even then, it was not too too long. It was still well done!

1. They were followed very well, noticeably and effectively.
2. My favorite part was that everything was opposite what the text said, it was funny and interesting.
3. I would not edit anything that she did.
4. The video was paced very well! I was interested in seeing what was going to happen next. I loved it!

1. The rules were followed noticeably and effectively
2. My favorite part was the odd but entertaining in a good way aspect of the film. It was entertaining.
3. The only edit I would make is to probably add music instead of the air background noise
4. The video was paced very well

1. The rules were followed noticeably and effectively
2. My favorite part was the humor. It was so funny and entertaining and very well done. I really enjoyed this film.
3. The only thing I may edit a bit was that it was a little confusing who was speaking, but it made sense.
4. It was paced very well and everything worked cohesively.

1. The rules were followed noticeably and effectively
2. My favorite part was really the whole thing, it definitely felt old-timey and everything worked very well cohesively. I loved the cat, she did great, the best actress.
3. I would not edit anything, everything was done very well.
4. It was paced very well.

1. The rules were followed noticeably and effectively, she also built upon the rules by adding 2 360 shots instead of just one
2. My favorite part was the overall meaning behind it, bringing awareness to OCD. That was great and I really liked that spin on “the perfect human”. It was very well done!!
3. I wouldn’t edit anything she did, It was amazing
4. It was paced very well.

1. The rules were followed noticeably and effectively
2. My favorite part of the video was the fourth wall break; it was very well done and well placed.
3. I wouldn’t edit anything; I really enjoyed the way Antonia did her film. It was very well done, and I loved the overall message of spreading awareness and showing what she goes through every day. She did an awesome job with this film.
4. The video was paced very well, and I didn’t feel like anything was too long or too short.

1. The rules were followed noticeably and effectively, except there were a few moments where the eye contact was broken.
2. My favorite part was the bits of humor placed in there. It was funny, entertaining, and engaging
3. I don’t think I would edit much. Only the few moments where the color bled through, like Ames said. Also reshooting the moments where eye contact was broken
4. The video was paced very well, no parts felt too long or too short.