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The video does follow the obstructions 

I liked the narration 

I would do a little bit more to move the video along

Some more movement of the character 

Film maker?: Mikayla Haynes

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Different camera shots, dialogue, and clips exceeding 15 seconds.

Favorite part?: Enjoyed the editing on the closeups on the face and how some clips would repeat.
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: I would remix the audio and reshoot some things to have the camera be more still.
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Everything felt properly paced—nothing was too quick or went on too long.

Film maker?: Kayla Bowman

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Wearing red/pink, having silent moments, used subtitles

Favorite part?: Glitch effects during parts when she’s frustrated—especially the part where it cuts to her screaming.
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: I would edit different music to fit the vibe and make it quieter
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some clips felt slightly drawn out or repetitive.

Film maker?: Gabriella Thomas

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Everything filmed outside, always moving

Favorite part?: Her sitting drinking water from different angles at the start
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Adding music to background, reshooting some shots that you can see the shadow of the camera
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Nothing felt too long or short

Film maker?: Tyler Lucas

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Sentences run through google translate, cannot smile, mostly makes eye contact constantly

Favorite part?: Cooking the bread & writing the note without looking
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Re edit to be completely black & white and reshoot to keep the eye contact
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Text slides were too short sometimes

Film maker?: Antonia Valeri

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Fourth wall break

Favorite part?: I liked the fourth wall break when she speaks to the camera
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: I would re edit the text to be more consistent in location and size
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some shots felt like they went on a little too long

Film maker?: Lily Clifford

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Black and white, only one part narrated, 360 shot

Favorite part?: When she kept checking to make sure her assignment submitted
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Music felt too loud
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some clips felt like they dragged on

Film maker?: Murro Gill

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Old film aesthetic, copyright free aesthetic music that fit the vibe, title cards instead of dialogue like a silent film

Favorite part?: Sped up clip of the cat cleaning herself
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Try to find different, less cliche music
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some title cards were too short to read

Film maker?: Aileena Sargeant

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Uneasy narration, dancing with only legs

Favorite part?: When the guy kept bringing up Sabrina Carpenter
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?:  Redo some shots to be more zoomed in and intense
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Paced good

Film maker?: Bekzod Nurboev

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Filmed outside, eyes are always closed, uses a prop

Favorite part?: When the actor uses the stick as a phone
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Remix audio to not fade in and out with each cut
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Paced good

Film maker?: Nada Almatani

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Subtitles, black&white, text-to-speech narration, hats in comedic way, doing something wrong

Favorite part?: Watching her struggle with the apron
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Re edit the lightning as some shots are very dark, and turn volume of narration up
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Clips were paced very well, entire video was slightly too long as a whole

Film maker?: Sid Crabtree

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Blank background, voiceover, exactly 3 minutes

Favorite part?: Dancing scene and whatever was after that

What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Re mix audio to get rid of background noise
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some clips dragged slightly, overall paced well for 3 mins

Film maker?: Saomi Jimenez

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Black and white, voiceover(?)

Favorite part?: I liked her explaining what she was doing
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: N/A
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Pacing was good, kept my attention

Film maker?: Noah Schardt

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: No objects, sound effect, non dominant hand, no front-facing shots

Favorite part?: The actor pretending to gold without a club or ball
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: N/A
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Pacing was good

The video does follow the obstructions

I really liked the product placement of the video

I would add more product placement throughout the video

The video was paced well

The rules were followed

I like that the video is about a golfer

I would not change anything

I think the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

The rules were followed

I like the narration

I would slow down the text

I think the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

The rules were followed

I like the narration

I would not change anything

I think the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

The video does follow the obstructions 

I liked the ascetic of the video 

I would reshoot when he opens the computer so there is a game up 

The video was paced well

The rules were followed

I like the simplicity of the video

Add dialogue in the last clip

I think the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

The rules were followed well

I like the camera angles

Make the dialogue a little louder

I think the video was placed well, the video was a little long

You followed the rules well

I liked the background noise

I would use dialogue 

The video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

The rules were followed

I like the perspective of the video

I would brighten the clips

I think the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

The rules were followed

My favorite part of the video was the cat being the main character

Make the text on the screen longer

The video was placed well, I would make the video a little longer

1. The rules were followed noticeably and effectively
2. My favorite parts were the humor, the sound effects, and that he did not have a golf club or a ball and it was just imaginary. It was very interesting, intriguing, and entertaining. The sound effects were perfectly timed and funny.
3. I would not change anything about what Noah did
4. The video was very well paced and nothing felt too long or too short. It was very well done!!

Mcayla Haynes

Yes, the rules were done correctly and consistently.

It’s hard to tell I enjoyed the whole thing, but I would say the whole insight into this person’s life and the lighting changes when we were in this person’s apartment.

More focus to the face when describing the human face.

Nothing felt too long or to short.

Kayla Bowmen

Yes the rules were made as followed

the cuts to how she felt while putting on her make-up. You get a sense of anxiety and emotion and the need to be perfect.

The hue of the video through me off to yellowish.

The video was very well paced. not oversimulating.

Ethan Bookbinder

Very creepy. Gave a backrooms vibe.

When all the faces became blurry

Make the video longer only 1:47 seconds.

video was paced very well for being shorter.

Lucas

Very consistent he did smile once and it wasn’t fully black and white.

Him trying not to smile and him playing ping pong.

fix the black and white

the video was very paced, nothing felt too short or too long.

Antonia Valeri

rules were followed perfectly.

Us seeing her through the mirror, breaking the 4th wall.

Fix the text, hard to read. Text should be in the same place throughout the film.

Video was well paced.

Lily Clifford

video followed rules to the tea

I also have minor symptoms of OCD and ADD so it felt relatible

Shot pretty well

no scene was to fast or slow =. paced very well\

Murro Chill

Executed very well cat was cute!

the cat scratching, gave me a good laugh

the video felt a little short. could make it longer.

Scenes felt a little short got a little over stimulated.

Aileena sargeant

followed rules almost perfect. wasn’t making anyone uncomfortable

The dance and the voice over

Add some more elements to make more unsettling. Whether it’s making scene black and white or changing voiceover

Video well paced

Unknown name

Rules were as followed

Using the stick as a phone

removing the shaving butter.

Video was paced very well.

Nada Almatani

Rules were followed perfectly felt very odd.

Her putting on the apron wrong, and how everything felt just a little sped up.

Make video shorter by a min. ran to long.

Video paced very well.

Sid Crabtree

He completed his rules.

How he looked confused as if he didn’t know why he was there.

The static in the background was distracting. Try to edit that out.

Video was paced well.

Gage

He followed his rules.

Him filling up the water bottle.

Make scenes a little longer. him writing on the paper would’ve made a good ending. I thought that was the end sequence.

Some scenes felt a little rushed especially around the beginning.

Sayome jimez

She followed her rules. looked like a tik tok!!

The whole video was shot very well. felt very modern.

Video was well made.

Everything was well paced.

Noah Schar

Followed his rules.

Him dancing around the yard.

Just put the text around lockers.

Video was well paced.

Yes the rules were followed

I think the music fits well

Make the text bigger

Yes the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short