Game documentation (to feed or not to feed)

Alana Tush

Game rules

  • Photos of:
    • the game when setup 
    • details of the pieces
    • glass beads (blue and white) and cards
    • Cards

any design iterations – changes to the board, cards or pieces

  • There were many versions of the cards, which I only have the final because I was working on the same illustrator document. I got blue glass beads for the food, and later bought white glass beads to switch out when the animal is fully fed. So i added that after play test An overview of changes made
  • I changed that the players can look at their cards before they put them down, instead of putting them down like a game of war where it is a mystery.
  • Your thoughts and lessons learned from play testing 
  • The game makes a lot more sense to me because I’ve been thinking about it and making the rules than it does to someone that has never seen the game before. It takes more time to learn.

Documentation of The Birds and the Beavers

We have not made any changes after this original prototype.

If I were to make further iterations of this, I would make minor mechanics tweaks and then enhance the design. First, I would add the ability to trade in useless resources for one players want at a 4:1 ratio. I would also add the ability to collect your teammates lives for them (but if they are dead they stay dead). Next, I would specify that a player does not need to roll the exact number to land in their teams home and place resources. Other than that, all changes would be cosmetic. I would flip “The Birds” and “nest” so it would be facing the birds team. I would make the board out of a thicker material and all of the spaces would be indented for the resource pieces to fit in like a puzzle. The resource pieces would be hexagonal. Perhaps the Player Icons could be little birds and beavers.

The game worked very well. Mechanics worked and the game was cute. With these minor tweaks, it would be a great game! I would be interested in taking it further.

Game Makers Play Test Notes

Alana Tush 

Game- To feed or not to feed

Players- Boyfriends Family

What questions did your players have?

  • In this play test the players wanted to learn as we went instead of reviewing the rules, so they had many questions about who one the hand, when rounds were over, and how the feeding worked.

How quickly did they learn to play?

  • After a few hands, they got the hang of how to play.

What kinds of interactions did the players have?

  • My boyfriend and his mom are very competitive and they both try to accuse each other of cheating all the time, so there was a lot of conversation.

What confused players?

  • At first, all the different numbers and sections on the cards was confusing to them, but they learned. 

What made players excited?

  • There were many rounds where one player didn’t win an animal, so they were frustrated but got excited when they finally won an animal.

What did your players enjoy doing?

  • We enjoyed taking the food for the animals and placing it on the cards, and once they were fully fed, switching the blue beads out for one white one.  

Did any aspect of the game frustrate players?

  • When there were many hands where one person didn’t win.

Game Makers Play Test Notes

Alana Tush

Game- To feed or not to feed

Players- Parents

What questions did your players have?

  • After they reviewed the rules and we started playing, they had questions about which spot on the cards were the strength meter and which part of the card was rewarding and feeding food. I directed them back to the rules where there is a diagram of the card with labels.

How quickly did they learn to play?

  • After a few minutes, everyone got the hang of it. It went pretty quickly.

What kinds of interactions did the players have?

  • my dad was really into the competitiveness of winning the strongest animal and was smack talking me and my mom.

What confused players?

  • At first, all the different numbers and sections on the cards was confusing to them, but they learned.

What made players excited?

  • We all got excited when we won the strongest animal and when it was fully fed.

What did your players enjoy doing?

  • We enjoyed counting up the fully fed animals at the end to see how many points we got

Did any aspect of the game frustrate players?

  • When someone kept an animal and could not discard it when they couldn’t feed it.

Dare the Deep Documentation

I changed the number you have to roll to be successful. Originally you must roll a sum of 1-6; I changed it to 1-8. I also changed the strictness of when you have to drop your treasure and keep diving. I let players choose to stop rolling but stay on their bubble.

I think this game has a fun metaphor that could be fun for a kids game but the mechanics need some work. I think their are a couple of options to do this. Perhaps players must complete 2-3 objectives from their dives. I should also clarify that objectives are not fulfilled until the treasure is brought to the surface. Something to consider could be changing the success of dives depending on the depth of the water. Example. from bubbles 1 to 3, you are successful if you roll a sum of 10. from bubbles 4-6, you are successful if you roll a 1-8… This way, we continue the metaphor and increase the feeling of productivity. I should alter the rules to let divers choose to stop on bubble and end their turn. If they lose a roll, they must swim up and NOT drop their treasure. Perhaps only the treasure from the last “checkpoint” can be brought up? Sorting out these mechanics would need further game tests.

Overall, the game would make a cute kids game that incorporates risk mechanics. However, the mechanics definitely need the most work out of all of my game prototypes.

Documentation of GoViral

Game Setup

An early development change I made was implementing a timer. Otherwise, players take too long thinking about their response.

The changes I made included adding a timer and a way of tracking points.

If I were to move forward with this prototype, I would add a new way of tracking points, a solution for ties, and another randomizing factor. I would probably make a “viral meter” where players could track their points and the first to get to the end goes viral and wins. The total amount of points needed to win would need to be tested but I would start with 100 points. For ties, I need to specify in the rules what happens. I would begin by saying that both players keep their cards. If that doesn’t seem fair after play testing, then the higher valued hashtag card wins. Finally, another randomizing factor may help differentiate this game from other similar party card games. I was thinking of having a “trend” spinner. On this spinner could be topics that match the hashtags. This spinner would be spun each round. If you play a hashtag that matches the trend, the points could be doubled.

Overall, the game mechanics worked and the post cards were funny. The format of the caption cards makes it incredibly versatile for a wide spectrum of age groups and provides a replayable experience. While I think it could be a fun game with these changes made, I am more interested in moving forward with other prototypes.

Gaming Marathon: Garden Sabatage

  • What was the most frustrating moment or aspect of what you just played? Losing the plant immediately with a bug.
  • What was your favorite moment or aspect of what you just played? I loved the art! I thought all of the pieces were cohesive. I think the pen and ink style works well! I also love that you can do three actions per turn. I haven’t played a game that you can do this but I think it makes players feel more productive and may reduce the feeling of turns being tedious. Overall, the game was well-paced and a good combination of fun and strategic.
  • Was there anything you wanted to do that you couldn’t?  A board would also be helpful for the draw piles etc. I think it could be cute if it was themed … maybe a market shelf? Pots?
  • If you had a magic wand to wave, and you could change, add, or remove anything from the experience, what would it be? More pesticide! Honestly, I think it was a fine amount. If there was more, it might be too easy.
  • What should be improved with the next version? I don’t know if it’s necessary to have drawing options for the insects/pesticide. At any point, you could sabotage people easily.
  • Describe the game in 3 words. Artsy, PlantMom, Well-Paced

User feedback for my Prototype #2 Baller Bros

  1. What was the most frustrating moment or aspect of what they just played?
    • There is a non-redeeming comeback system, you are able to get a large lead without players being able to catch up.
  2. What was their favorite moment or aspect of what they just played?
    • The bright and colorful aesthetic to the game made it look appealing, such as the colorful ping pong balls and the flame design on the hoops.
  3. Was there anything that players wanted to do but couldn’t?
    • Players wanted to try again with the scoring, since they were unlucky enough to only get one attempt. They also wanted more point options/opportunities to make the game more fun.
  4. If players had a magic wand to wave, and they could change, add, or remove anything from the experience, what would it be?
    • Make a tiny point modifier to increase points, which would raise the stakes. Players also wanted a really hard hoop to score in, potentially a really thin margin for scoring.
  5. What should be improved with the next version?
    • Better rules, more clarification, and a third factor implemented to make the playing experience less linear.
  6. Describe the game in 3 words.
    • Lucky, simple, challenging

Game Maker’s Play Test Notes

  1. What questions did your players have?
    • “We have to bounce the balls twice?”
    • “How do we get rid of the ping pong balls?”
    • “Does the spinner matter if you are only focusing on getting rid of your ping pong balls?”
  2. How quickly did they learn to play?
    • There was a decent amount of confusion in the instructions, which delayed the learning process. It probably took around 15 minutes for players to understand the mechanics of the game. Once players learned how to play, they gave me suggestions to make the rules more comprehensible.
  3. What kind of interactions did the players have?
    • Players were constantly competing to score more points against each other. They would observe how other people are doing, and either feel relieved the other player missed, or determined to win when the player scored.
  4. What confused players?
    • They were concerned with the number of balls in correlation to the rounds. They also questioned if it was turn-based, or race-based. In other words, they didn’t know if they should wait for other players to take their turn, or rush against others to score.
  5. What made players excited?
    • Players got the most excitement out of their own skill. If they would score the greatest number of points, they would feel ecstatic. Furthermore, players would laugh at others that couldn’t score points, boosting their confidence in securing a win.
  6. What did your players enjoy doing?
    • Some players enjoyed the competition aspect of my game, competing in scoring the greatest number of points. Other players enjoyed engaging in the mechanics, bouncing the balls into the hoops or spinning the wheel. Along with the wheel, a couple people found the “luck” factor of the game intriguing.
  7. Did any aspect of the game frustrate players?
    • There were no clear established aspects that frustrated players. The only things I found that bothered them was understanding the instructions. They also felt that there needed to be more to the game to make it more fun.

Freezing Folly game rules Connor Locke + Reese Edwards

Setup – Players are given a deck of cards which are separated into two piles, a draw pile and a picking pile. Each player also gets their own character, which is placed at the top of the iceberg. To set up the cards, fill in the slots of the card picking grid, face down on the board. Once the grid is filled in for players to pick, separate the remaining cards into a normal pile.

Objectives – The goal of the game is to be the last person/people standing on the iceberg. Relying on your memory, you must choose the proper tools to stay afloat. 

Actions to take – The player who is the youngest goes first. During a turn, the player picks a card from the draw pile. Whatever the tool on the card is, the player must rely on their memory of the pick pile grid to choose the right card.

Before the game begins, all of the cards are to be facing up, revealing what they are…This way, players familiarize themselves with where the cards are. It’s all about memory. If the card from the draw pile matches what is selected from the pick pile, the player remains in the same spot they are currently in.

If the cards do not match, the player sinks down one tile on the iceberg. When a card is chosen, if the cards do not match, then the card picked is flipped back over on the grid, and the draw pile card is put at the bottom of the draw deck. If the cards match, the player that chose the right card discards the card from the picking pile and places it in a discard pile. 

Ending the game – Once all of the cards have been discarded from the picking pile, the game ends. Whether you are staying afloat on the iceberg or submerged determines whether you have won or lost. Once a player has descended below the water line, they have sunken and lost.

Example #1 – It’s Jimmy’s turn, and he picks a card from the draw pile. The card is a pickaxe, so he must choose a card from the pick pile on what he thinks is a pickaxe. The card he chose didn’t match, so he flipped back over the card.

Trolls Riddle Run – Game Review – Sara Estus

1.) Most Frustrating moment or aspect: The riddles are so clever, and for me, it was more getting moved back during gameplay. I think it happened often enough I was frustrated, but it’s a good part of the game. Nothing unintentional that frustrated me!

2.) Favorite moment or aspect of the game?: I enjoyed the aspect of the chance cards a lot. It spiced things up and it wasn’t all about riddles

3.) Anything you wanted to do that you couldn’t?: Get all the riddles right at the end!! I got the first one right, and then lost at the second, making me go all the way back. 🙁

4.) If you could change anything about the game would you?: I want to clarify that I do not think the riddles should change. I think it is more a player error of not being able to answer them right easily. Though I do think for those players, maybe having levels of cards to pick from could help. But then I fee like everyone would pick easy cards.

5.) What should be improved for the next version?: Add more riddles!

6.) Describe the game in three words: Dad Joke Trolls

player questions for troll riddle run, rotten to the core, and Gideons game(forgot the name)

troll riddle run

  1. The most frustrating part was getting three riddles right in a row at the end.
  2. I had a lot of fun telling the others riddles.
  3. I don’t think we should have to guess a riddle right to start the game.
  4. If i had a magic wand to change something in this gam( which i do lol) i would make it so you can just start rolling and you don’t have to answer a riddle to start you first turn.
  5. the riddle at the start.
  6. troll, riddles, fun.

rotten to the core

  1. The most frustrating part of this game was the investigation cards, and the spinner not working like it was intended to.
  2. The art was really cute, and the game itself when at a pretty steady pace.
  3. I wish i had better luck but other than that no.
  4. If i had a magic wand id make their be more ways to sabotage other players.
  5. Make a better spinner.
  6. cutesy, mindful, demure.

Gideons game

  1. the most frustrating aspect was it wasn’t entirely finished, some parts were missing and the cards didn’t reflect what was in the rules.
  2. the chaos of the cards because some were overpowered if you were just playing with the cards and weren’t looking at the rules for every card description.
  3. stock pile good cards, but it is a fun concept to get a new hand every turn.
  4. if i had a magic wand i would finish the game.
  5. making the card descriptions match what was in the rules.
  6. grenade, rocket launcher, chaos.

trolls riddle run makers notes

  1. the players didn’t have any questions they understanded it very easily.
  2. it only took them a turn or 2 to understand the rules.
  3. telling the riddles to each other.
  4. the riddles confused players.
  5. the riddles made players excited.
  6. the riddles were enjoyable.
  7. the riddles frustrated them..

Garden Sabotage Playtest at Gaming Marathon 

Game Maker’s Play Tests Notes #1

  • What questions did your players have? Not really any 
  • How quickly did they learn to play? Pretty quickly, but there are a lot of little rules and different actions that make it more difficult. I was able to explain the rules faster than it would have taken to learn. 
  • What kinds of interactions did the players have? Playing bad bugs on each other, trying to prevent each other from reaching 5 objective cards first. 
  • What confused players? A little bit of confusion with how the pesticide works 
  • What made players excited? Being able to play a bug card, complete objectives, etc. 
  • What did your players enjoy doing? Same thing
  • Did any aspect of the game frustrate players? Not having any protection over the plants that you have. They could be eaten at any time. 

Player Questions #1 

  • What was the most frustrating moment or aspect of what you just played? Being sabotaged with bugs and losing a plant you planted 
  • What was your favorite moment or aspect of what you just played? Sweeping the plant cards, sabotaging with bugs. 
  • Was there anything you wanted to do that you couldn’t? Have protection for my plants with the pesticide 
  • If you had a magic wand to wave, and you could change, add, or remove anything from the experience, what would it be? Magically hand draw every illustration 
  • What should be improved with the next version? Specify that you can play the cards in any order, it doesn’t need to be the order that’s on the card. 
  • Describe the game in 3 words. Strategic, competitive, cute 

Potential Changes

  • Design the game board to look like plant pots, shelves, or a greenhouse maybe
  • Clarify that when dealing cards to players you take it from the top of the pile and not the reserve 
  • Have names on the back of the cards 
  • Have more instructions on the cards themselves
  • Have a protection over bugs being placed in your garden 
  • Clarify pesticide rules
  • Don’t have the two faceup bugs because it makes it too easy 
  • Clarify that you can lay down your cards in any order on your player mat

Rotten to the Core Playtests and Game Maker’s Notes

Game Maker’s Play Tests Notes #1

  • What questions did your players have? I don’t think the players really had any questions. They understood this game fairly well. 
  • How quickly did they learn to play? The players learned how to play very quickly, because it has pretty simple mechanics. 
  • What kinds of interactions did the players have? The interactions between players weren’t really a result of any mechanics but players had fun pointing out who was the most suspicious when they kept landing on investigation. 
  • What confused players? Some of the cards didn’t make the most sense due to some of our mistakes in creating the cards. For instance, some of the cards made you gain points on the decomposition scale, but in reality, they wouldn’t have really sped up decomposition. 
  • What made players excited? I think the story behind it made players the most excited. I think the first paragraph really set the scene for what the game was about and they began to imagine the scenarios of how they murdered their victims. 
  • What did your players enjoy doing? Players enjoyed flipping their booklets and looking at the cute illustrations
  • Did any aspect of the game frustrate players? I think it was frustrating to some players to roll Investigation so many times because it was a guaranteed loss of points. 

Player Questions #1 

  • What was the most frustrating moment or aspect of what you just played? There was no point in even picking up the Fungi or Bug cards when you land on Snowy on the spinner, because they aren’t worth any points. If you landed on Snowy and also rolled Fungi or Bug then, it was a waste of time with no points earned. 
  • What was your favorite moment or aspect of what you just played? I think the game is really cute and enjoyed spinning the spinner and flipping the booklet when I moved onto the next stage of decomposition. 
  • Was there anything you wanted to do that you couldn’t? I wanted there to be more interaction with the decomposition booklets. Like maybe the bug and fungi cards directly interacted with each other. 
  • If you had a magic wand to wave, and you could change, add, or remove anything from the experience, what would it be? Create more interactivity with the decomposition booklets besides just flipping the page; how to do that, I’m not sure. 
  • What should be improved with the next version? Add the possibility of framing other players when you roll Investigation. 
  • Describe the game in 3 words. Cute, sustainable murderers

Game Maker’s Play Tests Notes #2

  • What questions did your players have? I don’t really think the players had many questions
  • How quickly did they learn to play? Very quickly
  • What kinds of interactions did the players have? In this test, players could frame each other once they obtained 3 investigation cards if they rolled investigation on the die one more time. 
  • What confused players? The mechanics for framing other players were a little bit confusing, but that was mainly because it was a mechanic quickly thrown in. 
  • What made players excited? I wouldn’t say that anything particularly excited the players, but the opportunity to frame other players potentially did. They also liked how cute the game is. 
  • What did your players enjoy doing? The players enjoyed flipping the booklets. 
  • Did any aspect of the game frustrate players? It was frustrating landing on snowy on the spinner because of the lack of points it gives or landing on investigation so often because you lost points. 

Player Questions #2

  • What was the most frustrating moment or aspect of what you just played? Landing on investigation so many times. 
  • What was your favorite moment or aspect of what you just played? I liked having the opportunity to frame other players this time. 
  • Was there anything you wanted to do that you couldn’t? I still think it would be a good idea to have more interaction with the booklets. 
  • If you had a magic wand to wave, and you could change, add, or remove anything from the experience, what would it be? Make the booklets feel more necessary, more player interaction and interaction between the different game elements. 
  • What should be improved with the next version? More interaction with the booklets, build the framing into the mechanics a little bit better. 
  • Describe the game in 3 words. Love the creators

Ideas & Potential Things to Change

  • Change the points earned when it is snowy and you pick up a bug card or fungi card. I think sometimes the points could be 0 for both scenarios, but it shouldn’t be that anytime you roll bugs or mushrooms and land on snowy, it is a wasted turn
  • Maybe add type of the decomposition stages to the tombstone 
  • Add and smooth out mechanics to frame another player
  • Maybe add an inter-circle that has a humidity dimension that also alters the bodily decomposition
    • This could maybe be a multiplier?
  • Change the random events card about the children digging up the body because it just doesn’t make sense
    • Probably just get rid of it and replace it with a different scenario
  • Maybe add an event at the end of the game to hide the dried remains
  • Detachable body parts on the decomp booklets?
  • Operation like decomp booklets?
  • Add more interaction with the cards and the decomposition booklets
    • Maybe play the cards on the booklets?
  • Maybe add other faces of the die be things that aren’t cards or come up with another set of cards
  • Maybe have some spaces on the decomposition scale that make you do something, gain, or lose points?
  • Have a punishment for having a certain amount of investigation cards
    • Maybe you are taken in for questioning 
    • Maybe you go to court? Or jail?
    • Maybe you have to skip a turn 
  • Have some options for turn actions so people aren’t doing the same exact thing every turn
  • In the random events rules, remove the thing about having a scale for points
  • Decomposition booklet ideas
    • Maybe make the decomposition booklets a little smaller
    • Make the decomposition booklets flip more easily 
    • Make them clear with stickers
    • Make them like boxes
  • Maybe add some blush to the illustrations
    • Some think the illustrations could be gorier too