Final project critiques- Lily Clifford

Murro: I think the sound effects worked really well. The shadow was a little distracting.

Aileena: The 360 camera worked well. Its hard to follow when you are controlling the camera angle.

Chrystian: I think the colors fit well with the Pittsburgh theme. Maybe add something to the crowns.

Nikayla: I like the effect with the clock. The video dragged on at times as the logging into the accounts took a while.

Toni: I like the piano sound effect and the cat. Sometimes your legs cut off and weren’t fully in frame.

Ethan: The lighting works very well. Some music would be nice.

Tyler: The projection is clear. The camera was shaky and it was a little distracting.

Bekzod: I like the idea. Maybe add a little more to it.

Sara: The camera angles were good. The lighting got a little messed up but overall it was a great video.

Saomi: The overall idea was very creative. Maybe choose a solid color background.

Sid: I like the idea. Adjusting the speed would help.

Gabby: I liked the different camera angles. Sometimes you looked at the screen.

Noah: I liked the graphics, they were very creative. The animations started floating at the end which was a little distracting.

Gaige: The animation was very good. Adobe messing up was disappointing but the dancing at the end was funny.

Kayla: I like the details in the animation. Add a drop shadow on the posters on the wall.

Gavin: I like the sound effects.

Jana: I like the game concept. Maybe some rules posted would make it easier to understand.

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