Final project critiques- Lily Clifford

Murro: I think the sound effects worked really well. The shadow was a little distracting.

Aileena: The 360 camera worked well. Its hard to follow when you are controlling the camera angle.

Chrystian: I think the colors fit well with the Pittsburgh theme. Maybe add something to the crowns.

Nikayla: I like the effect with the clock. The video dragged on at times as the logging into the accounts took a while.

Toni: I like the piano sound effect and the cat. Sometimes your legs cut off and weren’t fully in frame.

Ethan: The lighting works very well. Some music would be nice.

Tyler: The projection is clear. The camera was shaky and it was a little distracting.

Bekzod: I like the idea. Maybe add a little more to it.

Sara: The camera angles were good. The lighting got a little messed up but overall it was a great video.

Saomi: The overall idea was very creative. Maybe choose a solid color background.

Sid: I like the idea. Adjusting the speed would help.

Gabby: I liked the different camera angles. Sometimes you looked at the screen.

Noah: I liked the graphics, they were very creative. The animations started floating at the end which was a little distracting.

Gaige: The animation was very good. Adobe messing up was disappointing but the dancing at the end was funny.

Kayla: I like the details in the animation. Add a drop shadow on the posters on the wall.

Gavin: I like the sound effects.

Jana: I like the game concept. Maybe some rules posted would make it easier to understand.

Lily Clifford Projection

For my light project, I decided to do a silhouette. When I first read the project description, I immediately thought about doing photography. Through the idea of a silhouette, I wanted to express a darker, lonely emotion through the photos. I took pictures of my friends with their shadows on the wall. Through these shadows I wanted them to represent what it can be like sometimes being in college. Sometimes, especially in the beginning of the school year, I felt trapped in my dorm alone without my family and felt homesick. I wanted to portray this feeling through my project. I used the dorm walls and a dark shadow of my friends to show a feeling of loneliness within a dorm. For the experimentation part of the project, I utilized different light sources to see which one best reflected the shadow on the wall. The first two photos use a regular phone flashlight, while the last photo uses a desk light. The desk light best showed the shadow on the wall, and having the camera be portrait rather than landscape best fit the shadow in the photo.

Murro Gil- Video Critique

The rules were followed

My favorite part of the video was the cat being the main character

Make the text on the screen longer

The video was placed well, I would make the video a little longer