Jimenez Finals Critique Notes

Lily

Works: Timing of dialogue/pacing of plot. 4th wall break

Would change: Upload format, wish it were full screen (landscape shot, but uploaded vertically)

Gabby

Works: Angles/shots well executed

Would change: I wish the environmental sounds were louder/clearer.

Muro

Works: Sound design and mixed media use, emotional appeal

Would Change: Top-down angle takes a second to get used to

Aileena

Works: Interactiveness, I like that the viewer can look anywhere with the 360 footage.

Would change: Add background music to boost the emotional aspect.

Chrystian

Works: Game rules. mechanics, and objectives are executed well

Would change: Add sound design

Nikayla

Works: Sense of relatability and being human, clock overlay

Would change: More shot/angle variety

Antonia

Works: Sound design. characters

Would change: Green screen effect could be less clunky

Ethan

Works: Smooth animation, great light design

Would change: Process was rather unorthodox, seemed to lack some planning

Tyler

Works: Smooth animation/transition between character movements, great projection

Would change: Need better camera setup

Bekzod

Works: Interactiveness/audience participation, creative concept

Would change: Reel version

Sara

Works: Great lighting and camera work, preparations & planning

Would change: Music choice

Sid:

Works: Great craftsmanship

Would change: Adjust framerate/speed

Noah

Works: Art style and music choice

Would change: 

Gaige

Works: Excellent narrative and creative solution

Would change: Speaking audio quality

Nada

Works: Interactivity

Would change: Rule clarity

Kayla

Works: Transitions, lighting, and sound design

Would change: Posters feel a bit out of place in the art style

Gavin

Works: Color grading, camer control

Would change: Walking sound plays when the character/camera is still

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