Final Crit Notes- Noah Schardt

Lily

Works: The lighting shots with the shadows were really cool!

Doesn’t: I didn’t like the long talking clips.

Gabby

Works: I enjoyed the lack of voiceover.

Doesn’t: I didn’t like the lack of all sound.

Murro

Works: The sounds along with the different mediums worked and how they changed intensity.

Doesn’t: I wish the perspective changed instead of just being the same.

Aileena

Works: 360 experience, SO cool especially on the phone.

Doesn’t: Viewing it on the laptop doesn’t work as well.

Chrystian

Works: The mechanics and the concept were really cool.

Doesn’t: Not necessarily that it doesn’t work, just that it is a hard level that doesn’t make sense for newcomers.

Nikayla

Works: I enjoyed the lack of voiceover or any lines.

Doesn’t: I didn’t like the over the shoulder angle.

Antonia

Works: Close ups and sound effects. The cat!

Doesn’t: Some of the editing was a little off.

Ethan

Works: I liked the added lighting on top.

Doesn’t: I wish there was audio or music.

Tyler

Works: The projection was awesome.

Doesn’t: The shakiness irked me a little.

Bekzod

Works: The format in which it was presented. It being on instagram is a perfect representation of this.

Doesn’t: It would be even better if each one were a reel so you could get the full effect.

Sara

Works: The different shots were REALLY cool.

Didn’t: The music choices didn’t fit in my opinion.

Saomi

Works: The drawings and the transitions between them were awesome.

Didn’t: The font was a little hard to read.

Sid

Works: The design of the animations are really good.

Didn’t: The speed was off a little bit and/or needed a strobe light to see it better? 

Gaige

Works: The sound effects for each stage were really good.

Didn’t: The shakiness of some shots  as opposed to others.

Nada

Works: The interactivity works really well.

Didn’t: Rules needed a little more explaining.

Kayla

Works: The ambiance and sound effects worked really well.

Didn’t: Posters being photos is a little off because it doesn’t match the rest.

Gavin

Works: The lighting and ambiance worked well.
Didn’t: The constant stepping noise even with no movement.

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