Author: noahschardt

• The rules were followed great! You did a good job on this.
• My favorite part was the eyeshadow blending. It was very satisfying to watch.
• If I had to edit something I would have liked to see maybe different angles.
• The pacing was incredibly fast but it absolutely worked.

• The rules were followed great.
• My favorite part was when you wrote the title out. That was creative and fit with the theme.
• I would have added Sid in a little more.
• The pacing felt completely fine.

• The rules were executed great.
• My favorite part was the dancing and then when he turned into a bird and then died? 
• I would have edited the transitions between frames to be only within the aspect ratio of the film.
• The pacing was great.

• The rules were followed great!
• My favorite part was the scene with the stove. I loved the contrast of the bright fire.
• I would have made some scenes brighter.
• It felt a little long, but overall the pacing was good.

• The only rule that wasn’t entirely followed was that the shaving cream wasn’t the stick too.
• My favorite part was the scene where she was eating. I liked the view from above
• I would have only changed the aspect ratio to horizontal to showcase more of the environment.
• It was paced very well and nothing felt too short or long to me.

• The rules were followed, but the video was more funny than uncomfortable.
• My favorite part was Jason dancing and then dying. 
• The only thing I would edit would be making the voiceover clearer.
• I had no problems with the pacing. It was paced very well.

• The rules were followed great!
• My favorite part was it being themed around a cat. 
• I would edit some shots to be a little brighter as some parts were too dark to really see any details.
• It was paced well, just would have liked the word cards to be shown a little longer.

• Rules were followed effectively
• My favorite part was the bathroom scene with the faucet. I loved that you made it into a statement about struggling with OCD. It was a painfully accurate representation.
• I would just edit the 360 shots so they weren’t cut off on the sides.
• The video was paced well, I just found the car scene to be a little long.

• I think the rules were followed very well. 
• My favorite part was when “the imperfect human” spoke. It felt more real if that makes sense. I loved the messaging behind it.
• I would change the font size to be a little bigger as it was a little hard to read. 
• I found the pacing to be very good for the video. 

• Only rules I feel could’ve been followed more were everything being in black and white and showing the lower body as little as possible. 
• My favorite part was the mogging. That was funny to me.
• I would change some of the editing as I already stated. 
• I think it was paced well, it just needed to have a little longer to read some of the text.

• Rules were followed amazingly. The analog horror theme fits PERFECTLY with these rules.
• My favorite park was the skinamarink-esque faceless scene. 
• I would just add more and make it longer.
• It was paced pretty quickly, but I don’t find that to be a problem with the horror theme.

• The rules were followed pretty well!
• My favorite part was the chair scene with all of the thinking dialogue.
• If I had to change something I would add quiet music to the background.
• It was paced very nicely!

• Rules were mine and were followed PERFECTLY. 
• The unsettling portions were awesome and I am so glad that you edited them the way you did.
• The only thing I would change if I had to change something would be to add even more color within it. 
• It was paced very well!

You took my rules and ran with them and I loved how it came out!

• Rules were followed very well. The camera angles were especially used very well.
• My favorite part was the repetitive sleeping portion.
• I would honestly re-edit the whole thing to be red like in the bedroom scenes. I loved the way the lighting engulfed everything.
• It was paced perfectly in my opinion. Nothing stuck out to me as too long or short.