Final Critiques- Antonia Valeri

Lily:

Good: The use of light and the forth wall break

Change: Actors

Gabby:

Good: use of obstructions with the video

change: background noise was a little distracting

Muro :

Good: sound effects for the stop motion

change: just getting ride of extra shadows

Aileena:

Good: I like how you can move the camera because it was filmed with the 360 camera

Change: played with the audio a little more

Chrystian:

Good: very user friendly

Change: change the background when the instructions pop up, so it is easier to read

Nikayla:

Good: I liked the use of overlaying the clock with the game play

Change: I would change the timing on logging into the assignment

Ethan:

Good: the light really brings the photos to life

Change: audio added Screen

Tyler:

Good: the projection was good

Change: get a tripod

Beckzod:

Good:the concept of actually doom scrolling

Change: make a stop motion with the photos

Sara:

Good: the different camera angles were good

Change: the lighting

Saomie:

Good: very good use of the characters

Change: the background if you change anything

Sid:

Good: I like the concept

Change: the Frame rates

Noah:

Good: I like the multimedia use of this project

Change: keep the drawing consistent

Gage:

Good: the animation style was very unique

change: would love to see more animation


Kayla:

Good: the lighting transitions were good

Change: draw the posters to match the rest of the animation

Gavin:

Good: I like the concept

Change the walking sound to only when the character is walking

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