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Final Critiques- Antonia Valeri
Lily:
Good: The use of light and the forth wall break
Change: Actors
Gabby:
Good: use of obstructions with the video
change: background noise was a little distracting
Muro :
Good: sound effects for the stop motion
change: just getting ride of extra shadows
Aileena:
Good: I like how you can move the camera because it was filmed with the 360 camera
Change: played with the audio a little more
Chrystian:
Good: very user friendly
Change: change the background when the instructions pop up, so it is easier to read
Nikayla:
Good: I liked the use of overlaying the clock with the game play
Change: I would change the timing on logging into the assignment
Ethan:
Good: the light really brings the photos to life
Change: audio added Screen
Tyler:
Good: the projection was good
Change: get a tripod
Beckzod:
Good:the concept of actually doom scrolling
Change: make a stop motion with the photos
Sara:
Good: the different camera angles were good
Change: the lighting
Saomie:
Good: very good use of the characters
Change: the background if you change anything
Sid:
Good: I like the concept
Change: the Frame rates
Noah:
Good: I like the multimedia use of this project
Change: keep the drawing consistent
Gage:
Good: the animation style was very unique
change: would love to see more animation
Kayla:
Good: the lighting transitions were good
Change: draw the posters to match the rest of the animation
Gavin:
Good: I like the concept
Change the walking sound to only when the character is walking
Light Experiment
During the 4th of July this past summer I went to Pymatuning with my best friends. We set off fireworks, swam, and had so much fun. I thought back to that weekend and about the fireworks and how much fun it was to see the light off of them. I know I couldn’t set off fireworks on campus so the next best options… Sparklers. I ended up photographing my friend in her letters for Greek Week. I came up with these cute photographs that use the sparkler as the only source of light.

Ethan Bookbinder
The video does follow the obstructions
I liked the horror aspect of the video
I would do a couple more shots of the human body
Add another minute to the video
Gabriella Thomas
The video does follow the obstructions
I liked the narration
I would do a little bit more to move the video along
Some more movement of the character
Kayla Bowman
The video does follow the obstructions
I really liked the product placement of the video
I would add more product placement throughout the video
The video was paced well
Nikayla Haynes
The video does follow the obstructions
I liked the ascetic of the video
I would reshoot when he opens the computer so there is a game up
The video was paced well
Game Review (One: Evil Uno)
- the basis of the game is to frustrate you
- reboot card
- dead man’s pile
- clarify if you can stack the plus cards
- I am Groot
Game Review(Battle of the Suits)
- not a multiplayer game
- add more cards
- explain attack rules and how to keep track of Hp
Game Review (Cat Rush)
- too many health cards
- add more attack cards
- have instructions on how to use the cat cards
Game Review (Magic Circle)
- Rules didn’t make sense
- The risk factor was my favorite part
- what is the meeple used for?
- use meeple as double or nothing
- add more risk factors or punishments for losses
- rethink Phase 3
