Final Critiques- Antonia Valeri

Lily:

Good: The use of light and the forth wall break

Change: Actors

Gabby:

Good: use of obstructions with the video

change: background noise was a little distracting

Muro :

Good: sound effects for the stop motion

change: just getting ride of extra shadows

Aileena:

Good: I like how you can move the camera because it was filmed with the 360 camera

Change: played with the audio a little more

Chrystian:

Good: very user friendly

Change: change the background when the instructions pop up, so it is easier to read

Nikayla:

Good: I liked the use of overlaying the clock with the game play

Change: I would change the timing on logging into the assignment

Ethan:

Good: the light really brings the photos to life

Change: audio added Screen

Tyler:

Good: the projection was good

Change: get a tripod

Beckzod:

Good:the concept of actually doom scrolling

Change: make a stop motion with the photos

Sara:

Good: the different camera angles were good

Change: the lighting

Saomie:

Good: very good use of the characters

Change: the background if you change anything

Sid:

Good: I like the concept

Change: the Frame rates

Noah:

Good: I like the multimedia use of this project

Change: keep the drawing consistent

Gage:

Good: the animation style was very unique

change: would love to see more animation


Kayla:

Good: the lighting transitions were good

Change: draw the posters to match the rest of the animation

Gavin:

Good: I like the concept

Change the walking sound to only when the character is walking

Light Experiment

During the 4th of July this past summer I went to Pymatuning with my best friends. We set off fireworks, swam, and had so much fun. I thought back to that weekend and about the fireworks and how much fun it was to see the light off of them. I know I couldn’t set off fireworks on campus so the next best options… Sparklers. I ended up photographing my friend in her letters for Greek Week. I came up with these cute photographs that use the sparkler as the only source of light. 

Ethan Bookbinder

The video does follow the obstructions 

I liked the horror aspect of the video

I would do a couple more shots of the human body

Add another minute to the video

Gabriella Thomas

The video does follow the obstructions 

I liked the narration 

I would do a little bit more to move the video along

Some more movement of the character 

Kayla Bowman

The video does follow the obstructions

I really liked the product placement of the video

I would add more product placement throughout the video

The video was paced well

Nikayla Haynes 

The video does follow the obstructions 

I liked the ascetic of the video 

I would reshoot when he opens the computer so there is a game up 

The video was paced well