12 Replies to “The Perfect Student”

  1. The rules were followed well. My favorite part was the fact that the character was standing in the way and in the middle of the hallway. I think it was paced really well and I wouldn’t change anything. Great work!

  2. Whose film Evelyn
    Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
    Yes

    What was your favorite part of the video?
    The commitment of the falling and worm lol

    What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?
    Fix the lighting a bit

    Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
    The voiceover makes it go a little slow for me

  3. The rules were followed nicely. My favorite part of the video was her walking up the steps and falling. I also like how that scene repeats over and over. I wish there were some nose effects when she moves her hands in one sound, but I enjoy the dancing scenes. I think the video was well-paced and presented well throughout.

  4. Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?:
    – Yes
    What was your favorite part of the video?
    – The repeated falling was funny
    What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
    – I’m not the biggest fan of the voice used
    Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
    – Yes, it was paced well

  5. Whose Film: Evelyn
    Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
    – Starwars text, including falling, metaphors
    What was your favorite part of the video?
    – My favorite part was the phone call scene
    What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
    – I would reshoot the fall
    Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
    – This was perfect and very well-paced

  6. The rules were followed very effectively. My favorite part was the falling. It felt very metaphorical and sophisticated. I wouldn’t reshoot anything and the video was paced really well and wasn’t too long or too short.

  7. Very well done with all the obstructions. Good choice doing narration with AI. The Star Wars outro was not quite right but thats okay I am sure it’s hard to edit that. Interesting choice not having music – well filmed and obviously thought out.

  8. The rules were followed effectively. The extended falling scene was difficult but pulled off really well. The video was well paced and the use of questions worked well especially with the end of different acts.

  9. 1) yes works effectively
    2) The fact people are functioning around them
    3) No changes
    4) Well paced to tell the story

  10. -The rules were followed perfectly
    -I like the natural feel to it. The shot in the hallway with people walking around her makes it all feel like it is natural
    -If I could edit anything, it would be to turn down the light. The hallway light was pretty bright, but not unbearable.
    -Nothing too out of the ordinary with the pacing of the video.

  11. The rules were followed effectively.
    My favorite thing about this video was that it was mostly filmed in one place. Another thing I liked was that it was filmed in “portrait” mode, I think overall it works well because of the narrow hallway and all the lines (the people, the walls, chairs, etc.) follows in “portrait” mode.

  12. Were the rules of the obstruction followed effectively?
    – Very much! The three acts worked really well together!

    What was your favorite part of the video?
    – Either the falling segment (props to the actor for committing to it!), the part where she did the worm, or when it switched from dancing to immediately lying on the ground

    What would you reshoot, reedit, etc.?
    – Nothing

    Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or short?
    – It was very well paced! Nothing seemed to stick around too long, and each scene flows well

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