10 Replies to “The Perfect Human”

  1. The rules were followed. I like what you did with the fact you couldn’t use dialogue. My favorite shot was the overhead shot of the food. I think that was done really well. The video is well paced and you did a really good job!

  2. He follows the rules very well. I like the jazz music and the precise detail in the video. When zooming in on his face, it could probably be done smother, but overall, the video was shot nicely. The pace of the video was consistent and easy to follow along with.

  3. Whose film Elijah
    Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
    Yes

    What was your favorite part of the video?
    It’s filmed really well. Perfectly center and smooth movements

    What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?
    I would fix the music because you can easily hear where it repeats, which is kind of distracting

    Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
    Yes it was paced good

  4. Whose Film: Elijah
    Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
    – Black and White, more than one character, no words
    What was your favorite part of the video?
    – I like the caption titles
    What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
    – I would reshoot transitions
    Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
    – I thought it was well paced

  5. Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?:
    – Yes
    What was your favorite part of the video?
    – I like loved the camera shot over the table and the word slides was smart
    What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
    – I wish the music didn’t have an obvious cut when it repeated
    Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
    – Yes, it was paced well

  6. The obstructions were executed very well. The actors did a great job portraying how you wanted it to look. It was simple yet effective with how you decided to show no dialogue. The message was cool too using younger kids as the actors. I liked it, nice job!

  7. Yes, the rules were followed effectively. My favorite part of the video was the end whenever it asks the questions about what is there to worry about. I wouldn’t reshoot anything anything because I like the way the video is set up. The video was paced well and tells a story.

  8. I liked the simplicity of no spoken dialogue. I think you implemented that nicely.
    I agree that a different font would’ve been nice if the font wasn’t san serif.
    Great job overall!

  9. -The rules were all tied in together, the use of words instead of dialogue is neat
    -Everything works together, the style of text with the music, and the use of 1 boy and 1 girl, like the original. Also very heartwarming.
    -The only thing that I would edit about the video is a unique font for the text.
    -The video was paced well, and the camera angles were unique.

  10. Were the rules of the obstruction followed effectively?
    – Yes. The silent movie style worked incredibly well

    What was your favorite part of the video?
    – The shot above the table

    What would you reshoot, reedit, etc.?
    – Aside from maybe adding a film grain filter over the footage, I wouldn’t change anything

    Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or short?
    – It felt well paced overall!

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