Final Critique Notes

Lilly Clifford 

One thing that works: the timing of the conversation was well paced. 

One thing that doesn’t: potentially move the angle over a bit to refrain from the glare on the camera.

Gabriella Thomas

One thing that works:  im not sure if this was meant to be some sort of thriller but the silence gave the video an eerie feeling.

One thing that doesn’t: the close up shot with the coffee cup before walking away should have been slightly trimmed to prevent seeing it be picked up again 

Murro Gill

One thing that works: the sound effects were very soothing.

One thing that doesn’t: there were a few shots where your finger came into view but weren’t extremely distracting 

Aileena Sargeant 

One thing that works:  the still shots were fascinating

One thing that doesn’t: im sure this happened when uploading the video/rmu wifi but the quality was a bit grainy 

Guy in the wife beater🧍🏽‍♀️

One thing that works:  both the color scheme and quality of the game itself look great 

One thing that doesn’t: possibly add a clear objective/goal to the game 

Antonia Valeri

One thing that works:  I love that the idea was a person shrinking into a doll house while using the house from coraline 

One thing that doesn’t: the green screen cut out quite a bit but overall this was great 

Ethan Bookbinder

One thing that works:  the lighting matching on both the photo and the background page worked really well

One thing that doesn’t: i have no recommendations, s/o jjk

Tyler Lucas 

One thing that works:  the projection/stop motion worked out really well

One thing that doesn’t: possibly framing the projection a bit more 

Bekzod Nurboev

One thing that works:  I like that we were made to scroll the projection on our own phones, very interactive 

One thing that doesn’t: rather than leaving it as photos alone possibly turn them into a stop motion video 

Sara Krim

One thing that works:  the music change used to build up the suspension was amazing.

One thing that doesn’t: I think possibly making the light fade back to the regular kind would’ve made it seamless 

Saomi Jimenez 

One thing that works:  the drawings were very cute & because I’ve seen the trend it’s very fitting

One thing that doesn’t: possibly move the song credits out the way 

Sidney Crabtree

One thing that works:  the outer rims movement was quite mesmerizing 

One thing that doesn’t: the inner rims movement makes the images loose detail very easily 

Noah Schardt

One thing that works:  the incorporation of animation and real world visuals went together extremely well

One thing that doesn’t: no complaints I loved this

Gaige Stebler

One thing that works:  the animation at the beginning was quite smooth, sid dancing was my favorite part

One thing that doesn’t: the baby audio could have been slightly turned down 

Nada Almatani

One thing that works:  the graphic quality on this video look really nice 

One thing that doesn’t: the rules were a bit confusing at first but after testing it’s cool

Kayla Bowman

One thing that works:  the lighting tracked very well with the door being opened 

One thing that doesn’t: possibly try white text 

Gavin Raabe

One thing that works:  the hand in frame like old indie games was a nice touch

One thing that doesn’t: the walking audio could have been synced a bit better

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