Lily Clifford
1 thing that works: The lighting really adds the suspense feeling to the film
1 thing I would change: The echo is a little distracting, I would try and change how the audio came out.
Gabby
1 thing that works: The angles and scenery really makes the video feel cozy.
1 thing I would change: The pacing is on the slower side, so I would try to get quicker and smaller shots to combine.
Aileena Sargeant
1 thing that works: It feels like im on the motorcycle looking around
1 thing I would change: The camera is very shaky and the quality kinda deprives the experience
Christian
1 thing that works: Battle Block Theatre really gives the game a personality
1 thing I would change: there’s 2 points with the crown square things(?) so i feel like it would be cool to only have 1 point to stay on.
Nikayla Haynes
1 thing that works: The lighting looks really good when the curtains close
1 thing I would change: Watching the laptop load got a little tiring
Toni
1 thing that works: The overlay matches with the background very smoothly (closing the door, playing the piano, etc.)
1 thing I would change There are some parts where her pants fade into the background
Ethan
1 thing that works: The lighting really works well
1 thing I would change: The camera at the beginning moves a little bit, a steadier tripod would probably fix it
Bekzod
1 thing that works: Very unique idea, plays off of the perfect human
1 thing I would change: A lot of the photos look the same/repetitive
Sara
1 thing that works: The camera focus and quality of production is really nice, the music is the cherry on top
1 thing I would change: More emotion from the actor would add more to the story
Saomi
1 thing that works: The explanations really add a whole new impact to it
1 thing I would change: Add mini blurbs to the video so you would have to explain less
Sid
1 thing that works: Zoetrope style works really well
1 thing I would change: Adding music or changing the camera angle would’ve added more to the video
Noah
1 thing that works: The mix of real life and animation was very cute
1 thing I would change: some camera movements moved the animation and it made a weird misplacement effect
Gaige
1 thing that works: The stop motion animation to video transition was cool
1 thing I would change: The audio volume was very different at times
Jana
1 thing that works: The sheet of numbers with the dice animation was neat
1 thing I would change: The rules were very confusing, but I didn’t fully understand it
Kayla
1 thing that works: The story is heartwarming
1 thing I would change: I would’ve loved to see more to the animation