Kaley Rohanna: Video Crit Notes

Whose film Andrew

Were rules for obstruction followed effectively?

Yes

Favorite Part

The cat in the box

What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?

I think with the obstructions, it was shot pretty well and I wouldn’t change anything.

Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?

It was paced well and didn’t feel long.

Whose film Belle

Were rules for obstruction followed effectively?

Favorite part?

The train track scene

What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?

I would use different music to go with the videos.

Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?

It was paced well.

Whose film Harmony

Were rules for obstruction followed effectively?

Favorite part?

The part when the backpack covered the camera at first

What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?

I liked all the videos.

Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?

I would add more cuts to the orange peeling part just to make it go a little quicker. 

Whose film Meredith 

Were rules for obstruction followed effectively?

Favorite part?

Eating Chick Fil A

What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?

I would keep it the same. The long parts fit with the awkwardness of the silence.

Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?

It was paced well.

Whose film Mikayla

Were rules for obstruction followed effectively?

Favorite part?

Flipping through the papers to show the credits

What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?

I thought it’s very good the way it is.

Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?

The pacing was good, the voiceovers and inner thoughts helped to keep the audience engaged. 

Whose film Daria

Were rules for obstruction followed effectively?

Yes

Favorite part? 

I liked how it was in first person POV when walking.

What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?

I would add more shots of different scenery.

Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?

Some of the parts walking down trails and paths, could be a little shorter.

Whose film Angeline

Were rules for obstruction followed effectively?

Yes 

Favorite part?

I liked the song choice.

What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?

Shorten the cuts between dolls.

Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?

Yes, the changes from doll to doll helped show them communicating with each other.

Whose film Norina

Were rules for obstruction followed effectively?

yes

Favorite part?

The correlation between the drawings and what was acted out.

What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?

I liked everything about it.

Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?

It was paced very well and was entertaining the whole way through.

Whose film Sammy

Were rules for obstruction followed effectively?

Yes 

Favorite part?

I liked the use of plushies in place of the animal obstruction.

What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?

I would get rid of the transitions between shots when going from plushie to plushie. 

Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?

It was well paced, the music gave it a lot of excitement along with the videos. 

Whose film James

Were rules for obstruction followed effectively?

Yes 

Favorite part?

The little men WWE wrestling

What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?

I would shorten the video lengths and add a few more performances.

Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?

The videos were a little long.