Video Critique Notes
Mcayla Haynes
Yes, the rules were done correctly and consistently.
It’s hard to tell I enjoyed the whole thing, but I would say the whole insight into this person’s life and the lighting changes when we were in this person’s apartment.
More focus to the face when describing the human face.
Nothing felt too long or to short.
Kayla Bowmen
Yes the rules were made as followed
the cuts to how she felt while putting on her make-up. You get a sense of anxiety and emotion and the need to be perfect.
The hue of the video through me off to yellowish.
The video was very well paced. not oversimulating.
Ethan Bookbinder
Very creepy. Gave a backrooms vibe.
When all the faces became blurry
Make the video longer only 1:47 seconds.
video was paced very well for being shorter.
Lucas
Very consistent he did smile once and it wasn’t fully black and white.
Him trying not to smile and him playing ping pong.
fix the black and white
the video was very paced, nothing felt too short or too long.
Antonia Valeri
rules were followed perfectly.
Us seeing her through the mirror, breaking the 4th wall.
Fix the text, hard to read. Text should be in the same place throughout the film.
Video was well paced.
Lily Clifford
video followed rules to the tea
I also have minor symptoms of OCD and ADD so it felt relatible
Shot pretty well
no scene was to fast or slow =. paced very well\
Murro Chill
Executed very well cat was cute!
the cat scratching, gave me a good laugh
the video felt a little short. could make it longer.
Scenes felt a little short got a little over stimulated.
Aileena sargeant
followed rules almost perfect. wasn’t making anyone uncomfortable
The dance and the voice over
Add some more elements to make more unsettling. Whether it’s making scene black and white or changing voiceover
Video well paced
Unknown name
Rules were as followed
Using the stick as a phone
removing the shaving butter.
Video was paced very well.
Nada Almatani
Rules were followed perfectly felt very odd.
Her putting on the apron wrong, and how everything felt just a little sped up.
Make video shorter by a min. ran to long.
Video paced very well.
Sid Crabtree
He completed his rules.
How he looked confused as if he didn’t know why he was there.
The static in the background was distracting. Try to edit that out.
Video was paced well.
Gage
He followed his rules.
Him filling up the water bottle.
Make scenes a little longer. him writing on the paper would’ve made a good ending. I thought that was the end sequence.
Some scenes felt a little rushed especially around the beginning.
Sayome jimez
She followed her rules. looked like a tik tok!!
The whole video was shot very well. felt very modern.
Video was well made.
Everything was well paced.
Noah Schar
Followed his rules.
Him dancing around the yard.
Just put the text around lockers.
Video was well paced.
Project #2
Gabriella Thomas
Janga remastered
- Nothing that made the game game difficult
- I loved the different cards while you were playing the game. It made Janga more interesting and interactive with your opponent.
- Nope
- I didn’t get to play the original version.
- For the next version I would make more cards. It would make you add more words to more Jenga blocks, but it would make it more interactive.
- Child filled fun
- I would 100% play this game again. it brought back so many memories from when i was a child and now its even more fun.
Shoots and ladders remastered
- Nothing.
- Being able to go up the ladder.
- Nothing.
- I didn’t get to play the original.
- Make the characters smaller so they fit on the board.
- candy rainbow madness.
- Yes, very easy to understand.
One
- Learning the new cards. Does white mean you refer back to the colored card?
- making someone draw 6. seeing a card with Mr. beast face on it.
- Nothing
- Last time there wasn’t enough cards. now there’s plenty of cards.
- Make the type less drippy. Had a hard time identifying the 7 and 1.
- Dark drippy crazy
- Yes, this game was like a crazy version of UNO. All the new cards added a very fun twist to the game.
Personal document
- The game we made is based off of SKYJO an early 2000’s card game. Instead of just numbers we made it with cartoon animals. game can be played with ages 10 and up.
- From the first version the designs were sloppy and inconsistent. We removed an animal and fixed the lines.
- Make rules more understandable.
- Add more constancy in the artwork.
Tester / Play tester
Game name Pirates:
Not understanding what the goal is?
The experience. Getting to learn a whole new game.
A little disappointed that I couldn’t attack unless I was at a certain distance from the “boss”.
Layout of rules. add some personality to them. Make it feel like a treasure map?
Make rules clear for new players
Pirate adventure
full of mayhem!! Very fun!!!