Gabriella Thomas  Video

  • The rules were followed pretty well!
  • My favorite part was the chair scene with all of the thinking dialogue.
  • If I had to change something I would add quiet music to the background.
  • It was paced very nicely!

Kayla Bowman Video

  • Rules were mine and were followed PERFECTLY. 
  • The unsettling portions were awesome and I am so glad that you edited them the way you did.
  • The only thing I would change if I had to change something would be to add even more color within it. 
  • It was paced very well!

You took my rules and ran with them and I loved how it came out!

Nikayla Haynes Video

  • Rules were followed very well. The camera angles were especially used very well.
  • My favorite part was the repetitive sleeping portion.
  • I would honestly re-edit the whole thing to be red like in the bedroom scenes. I loved the way the lighting engulfed everything.
  • It was paced perfectly in my opinion. Nothing stuck out to me as too long or short.

Ethan Bookbinder

The video does follow the obstructions 

I liked the horror aspect of the video

I would do a couple more shots of the human body

Add another minute to the video

Gabriella Thomas

The video does follow the obstructions 

I liked the narration 

I would do a little bit more to move the video along

Some more movement of the character 

Perfect Human Critique Questions

Film maker?: Mikayla Haynes

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Different camera shots, dialogue, and clips exceeding 15 seconds.

Favorite part?: Enjoyed the editing on the closeups on the face and how some clips would repeat.
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: I would remix the audio and reshoot some things to have the camera be more still.
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Everything felt properly paced—nothing was too quick or went on too long.

Film maker?: Kayla Bowman

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Wearing red/pink, having silent moments, used subtitles

Favorite part?: Glitch effects during parts when she’s frustrated—especially the part where it cuts to her screaming.
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: I would edit different music to fit the vibe and make it quieter
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some clips felt slightly drawn out or repetitive.

Film maker?: Gabriella Thomas

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Everything filmed outside, always moving

Favorite part?: Her sitting drinking water from different angles at the start
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Adding music to background, reshooting some shots that you can see the shadow of the camera
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Nothing felt too long or short

Film maker?: Tyler Lucas

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Sentences run through google translate, cannot smile, mostly makes eye contact constantly

Favorite part?: Cooking the bread & writing the note without looking
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Re edit to be completely black & white and reshoot to keep the eye contact
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Text slides were too short sometimes

Film maker?: Antonia Valeri

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Fourth wall break

Favorite part?: I liked the fourth wall break when she speaks to the camera
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: I would re edit the text to be more consistent in location and size
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some shots felt like they went on a little too long

Film maker?: Lily Clifford

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Black and white, only one part narrated, 360 shot

Favorite part?: When she kept checking to make sure her assignment submitted
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Music felt too loud
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some clips felt like they dragged on

Film maker?: Murro Gill

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Old film aesthetic, copyright free aesthetic music that fit the vibe, title cards instead of dialogue like a silent film

Favorite part?: Sped up clip of the cat cleaning herself
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Try to find different, less cliche music
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some title cards were too short to read

Film maker?: Aileena Sargeant

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Uneasy narration, dancing with only legs

Favorite part?: When the guy kept bringing up Sabrina Carpenter
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?:  Redo some shots to be more zoomed in and intense
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Paced good

Film maker?: Bekzod Nurboev

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Filmed outside, eyes are always closed, uses a prop

Favorite part?: When the actor uses the stick as a phone
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Remix audio to not fade in and out with each cut
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Paced good

Film maker?: Nada Almatani

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Subtitles, black&white, text-to-speech narration, hats in comedic way, doing something wrong

Favorite part?: Watching her struggle with the apron
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Re edit the lightning as some shots are very dark, and turn volume of narration up
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Clips were paced very well, entire video was slightly too long as a whole

Film maker?: Sid Crabtree

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Blank background, voiceover, exactly 3 minutes

Favorite part?: Dancing scene and whatever was after that

What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Re mix audio to get rid of background noise
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some clips dragged slightly, overall paced well for 3 mins

Film maker?: Saomi Jimenez

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Black and white, voiceover(?)

Favorite part?: I liked her explaining what she was doing
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: N/A
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Pacing was good, kept my attention

Film maker?: Noah Schardt

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: No objects, sound effect, non dominant hand, no front-facing shots

Favorite part?: The actor pretending to gold without a club or ball
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: N/A
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Pacing was good

Kayla Bowman

The video does follow the obstructions

I really liked the product placement of the video

I would add more product placement throughout the video

The video was paced well

Nikayla Haynes 

The video does follow the obstructions 

I liked the ascetic of the video 

I would reshoot when he opens the computer so there is a game up 

The video was paced well