Category: 4D Studio

You followed the rules well

I liked the background noise

I would use dialogue 

The video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

The rules were followed

I like the perspective of the video

I would brighten the clips

I think the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

The rules were followed

My favorite part of the video was the cat being the main character

Make the text on the screen longer

The video was placed well, I would make the video a little longer

1. The rules were followed noticeably and effectively
2. My favorite parts were the humor, the sound effects, and that he did not have a golf club or a ball and it was just imaginary. It was very interesting, intriguing, and entertaining. The sound effects were perfectly timed and funny.
3. I would not change anything about what Noah did
4. The video was very well paced and nothing felt too long or too short. It was very well done!!

Mcayla Haynes

Yes, the rules were done correctly and consistently.

It’s hard to tell I enjoyed the whole thing, but I would say the whole insight into this person’s life and the lighting changes when we were in this person’s apartment.

More focus to the face when describing the human face.

Nothing felt too long or to short.

Kayla Bowmen

Yes the rules were made as followed

the cuts to how she felt while putting on her make-up. You get a sense of anxiety and emotion and the need to be perfect.

The hue of the video through me off to yellowish.

The video was very well paced. not oversimulating.

Ethan Bookbinder

Very creepy. Gave a backrooms vibe.

When all the faces became blurry

Make the video longer only 1:47 seconds.

video was paced very well for being shorter.

Lucas

Very consistent he did smile once and it wasn’t fully black and white.

Him trying not to smile and him playing ping pong.

fix the black and white

the video was very paced, nothing felt too short or too long.

Antonia Valeri

rules were followed perfectly.

Us seeing her through the mirror, breaking the 4th wall.

Fix the text, hard to read. Text should be in the same place throughout the film.

Video was well paced.

Lily Clifford

video followed rules to the tea

I also have minor symptoms of OCD and ADD so it felt relatible

Shot pretty well

no scene was to fast or slow =. paced very well\

Murro Chill

Executed very well cat was cute!

the cat scratching, gave me a good laugh

the video felt a little short. could make it longer.

Scenes felt a little short got a little over stimulated.

Aileena sargeant

followed rules almost perfect. wasn’t making anyone uncomfortable

The dance and the voice over

Add some more elements to make more unsettling. Whether it’s making scene black and white or changing voiceover

Video well paced

Unknown name

Rules were as followed

Using the stick as a phone

removing the shaving butter.

Video was paced very well.

Nada Almatani

Rules were followed perfectly felt very odd.

Her putting on the apron wrong, and how everything felt just a little sped up.

Make video shorter by a min. ran to long.

Video paced very well.

Sid Crabtree

He completed his rules.

How he looked confused as if he didn’t know why he was there.

The static in the background was distracting. Try to edit that out.

Video was paced well.

Gage

He followed his rules.

Him filling up the water bottle.

Make scenes a little longer. him writing on the paper would’ve made a good ending. I thought that was the end sequence.

Some scenes felt a little rushed especially around the beginning.

Sayome jimez

She followed her rules. looked like a tik tok!!

The whole video was shot very well. felt very modern.

Video was well made.

Everything was well paced.

Noah Schar

Followed his rules.

Him dancing around the yard.

Just put the text around lockers.

Video was well paced.

Yes the rules were followed

I think the music fits well

Make the text bigger

Yes the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

Yes the rules were followed

I think the music fits well with the video

The text in between the shots, just make it longer so its easier to read

It was placed well, make the text clips longer

The rules were followed

I like the simplicity of the video

The video should be a bit longer

I think the video was placed well, just add more

1. The rules were followed noticeably and effectively
2. My favorite part was that it was intended to feel like a modern take and like a TikTok, that was fully readable and it definitely felt like a TikTok. It was really well done!
3. I wouldn’t change anything!
4. The video was paced very well!

The rules were followed

I like the different perspectives

I would add a little more movement

The video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

1. The rules were followed noticeably and effectively
2. My favorite part was that he forgot his blue folder at the very end. Though it was probably unintentional, it adds that aspect of although being a perfect student, mistakes happen. It adds to the film. Overall, I enjoyed the film and it was well done.
3. I would not really change anything that Gaige did
4. The video was paced well; some parts felt a bit long like the homework scene but other than that it was good!

The rules were followed 

I like the different camera angles and different shots

At the end maybe add a little more of internal dialogue

The video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

The rules were followed

I like how you incorporated multiple camera angles

I would re-record the him opening the computer

I think the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short

1. They were followed noticeably and effectively
2. My favorite part was the dancing, the flapping, and then the falling. It was funny and entertaining
3. I wouldn’t change anything about what Sid did, it was very entertaining and well done!
4. The video was paced well. Some parts felt a little long, like the reading section, but even then, it was not too too long. It was still well done!

1. They were followed very well, noticeably and effectively.
2. My favorite part was that everything was opposite what the text said, it was funny and interesting.
3. I would not edit anything that she did.
4. The video was paced very well! I was interested in seeing what was going to happen next. I loved it!