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Video Crit Notes

Emma

Rules

  • shoot in 5 different locations
  • can only use one part of a song (can repeat it as many times as needed)
  • only one actor
  • no cartoons
  • can only use one song throughout

Was the rules for the obstruction followed effectively

  • Yes

What was your favorite part of the video

  • I Really like the transition from sharks to land texture (also liked the locations she went)

What would you edit, shoot, etc?

  • Maybe change the song fading

Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or too short

  • It’s really well paced though when the song fades I thought it was done already but then it continues

Mason

Rules

  • No music
  • Only natural light
  • In color
  • Don’t show the actor’s faces
  • Each scene must be in a different location 

Was the rules for the obstruction followed effectively

Yes

What was your favorite part of the video

  • I love the constant voice and more serious tone

What would you edit, shoot, etc?

  • I liked everything

Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or too short

  • I say it’s well paced

Bryce

Rules

  • Form of slow motion
  • Black and white
  • Any type of filter

Was the rules for the obstruction followed effectively

  • Yes

What was your favorite part of the video

  • I really like the dancing effect where they dance and another them faded dances with them

What would you edit, shoot, etc?

  • I liked everything

Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or too short

  • I say it’s well paced

Aleah

Rules

  • Don’t use one scene more than once
  • must hambone three times for 3 seconds
  • someone must do a cartwheel
  • eat a piece of cake
  • must play good feeling by flo rida in credit roll

Was the rules for the obstruction followed effectively

  • Yes

What was your favorite part of the video

  • I really like how the cake is important to the story and the effects

What would you edit, shoot, etc?

  • I liked everything

Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or too short

  • I say it’s well paced

Andrew

Rules

  • Not using yourself
  • no audio
  • No interaction
  • Filming cat
  • Cat doing basic needs

Was the rules for the obstruction followed effectively

  • Yes

What was your favorite part of the video

  • I liked how how the cat is the main focus 

What would you edit, shoot, etc?

  • Maybe more action

Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or too short

  • I feel like the licking segments are a bit too long

Annabelle

Rules

  • No dialogue (Narration or character)
  • Minimal amount of cuts/shots
  • The actor must have a word written on their forehead
  • One person at a time 
  • Must include a bottle of Coca Cola

Was the rules for the obstruction followed effectively

  • Yes

What was your favorite part of the video

  • A liked the guy dancing

What would you edit, shoot, etc?

  • The coca cola seems like an afterthought (maybe add it more to the story)

Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or too short

  • I say it’s well paced

Harmony

Rules

  • Must be in black and white
  • No talking
  • Must be made outside

Was the rules for the obstruction followed effectively

  • Yes

What was your favorite part of the video

  • I liked the black and white

What would you edit, shoot, etc?

  • Have it one orange instead of two

Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or too short

  • Maybe the orange segment is a bit too long

Meredith M.

Rules

  • no filter
  • shot outside
  • no sound
  • animals can be shown, only one per frame
  • only one person per frame

Was the rules for the obstruction followed effectively

  • Yes

What was your favorite part of the video

  • I liked the jumping segment

What would you edit, shoot, etc?

  • I liked everything

Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or too short

  • I think it’s well paced

Kaley J.

Rules

  • 15 frames
  • theme of technology
  •  must be shot with older form of video (camcorder/ older phone etc)
  • told through music
  • black and white

Was the rules for the obstruction followed effectively

  • Yes

What was your favorite part of the video

  • I really like some clips being on a screen

What would you edit, shoot, etc?

  • I liked everything

Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or too short

  • I think it’s well paced

Angelina

Rules

  • Black and White
  • No humans
  • Two Characters need to interact

Was the rules for the obstruction followed effectively

  • Yes

What was your favorite part of the video

  • I liked how the character seem to interact with music instead of audio

What would you edit, shoot, etc?

  • Maybe less flashing lights

Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or too short

  • Some of the images take too long

Norina

Rules

  • two people never actually interact in the same scene
  • soft music, (barely hear it)
  • natural light 
  • two people

What was your favorite part of the video

  • I like the music and calmingness of the video (also how different the characters are)

What would you edit, shoot, etc?

  • I liked everything

Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or too short

  • I say it’s well paced

James

Rules

  •  can only film in not as professional clothing
  • no filters are allowed (cannot apply a color change to the film)
  • have one black and white scene as an exception from the no filter rule.

Was the rules for the obstruction followed effectively

  • Yes

What was your favorite part of the video

  • I liked how he visited different places

What would you edit, shoot, etc?

  • Maybe interviews of people that you visited

Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or too short

  • Segments like the basketball and boxing are too long

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4d Video- Harmony Jablon

4d VideoDownload

Rules: 

Black and white

No talking 

Filmed outside

IF I would have subtitled the script would be: 

“Here is the perfect human”

“The perfect human gets ready for her day… keeping it simple brushing her hair, nothing crazy” 

“The perfect human doesn’t like chaos”

“The perfect day so far for the perfect human… no obligations, no chaos… just a simple and calm day”

“The perfect human eats her snack, just a simple orange and some water… basic”

“The perfect human enjoys her snack, along with a sip of her water”

“The simple, calm, and perfect day for this perfect human”

*the end

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Candy World game

First Attempt: For my game, I did not have it the first week we were doing games. So, I had a family member try it at home. They liked the game overall, but they wish I had more characters. Originally, I had two characters. The game I was going off of was Candy Land. Similar but had less rules to it. He also suggested I add more rules to the game. Unfortunately, I don’t have any pictures from the first try of my game.

Second Attempt: I was able to bring my game to class the second week we were trying them out. seems like a lot of people liked it. I noticed some people got a little confused over the rules in this one. But some requested to me that maybe in another change for the game, I added more rules to the game to make it little more engaging.

At home family answers: Questions to consider during play and answer after play.

  1. What was the most frustrating moment or aspect of what you just played? Trying to understand where to go.
  2. What was your favorite moment or aspect of what you just played? Trying to get a good card. 
  3. Was there anything you wanted to do that you couldn’t? Try to get a three color card. 
  4. If you had a magic wand to wave, and you could change, add, or remove anything from the experience, what would it be? Making more cards, add three colors or go back two. 
  5. What should be improved with the next version? Make more cards and more rules. 
  6. Describe the game in 3 words. Fun, exciting, interesting.