- Rules were followed amazingly. The analog horror theme fits PERFECTLY with these rules.
- My favorite park was the skinamarink-esque faceless scene.
- I would just add more and make it longer.
- It was paced pretty quickly, but I don’t find that to be a problem with the horror theme.
Gabriella Thomas Video
- The rules were followed pretty well!
- My favorite part was the chair scene with all of the thinking dialogue.
- If I had to change something I would add quiet music to the background.
- It was paced very nicely!
Kayla Bowman Video
- Rules were mine and were followed PERFECTLY.
- The unsettling portions were awesome and I am so glad that you edited them the way you did.
- The only thing I would change if I had to change something would be to add even more color within it.
- It was paced very well!
You took my rules and ran with them and I loved how it came out!
Nikayla Haynes Video
- Rules were followed very well. The camera angles were especially used very well.
- My favorite part was the repetitive sleeping portion.
- I would honestly re-edit the whole thing to be red like in the bedroom scenes. I loved the way the lighting engulfed everything.
- It was paced perfectly in my opinion. Nothing stuck out to me as too long or short.
Ethan Bookbinder
The video does follow the obstructions
I liked the horror aspect of the video
I would do a couple more shots of the human body
Add another minute to the video
Perfect Human & Classmates’ Critiques
Here is the Google Drive link to the project:
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Gabriella Thomas
The video does follow the obstructions
I liked the narration
I would do a little bit more to move the video along
Some more movement of the character
Perfect Human Critique Questions
Film maker?: Mikayla Haynes
Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Different camera shots, dialogue, and clips exceeding 15 seconds.
Favorite part?: Enjoyed the editing on the closeups on the face and how some clips would repeat.
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: I would remix the audio and reshoot some things to have the camera be more still.
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Everything felt properly paced—nothing was too quick or went on too long.
Film maker?: Kayla Bowman
Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Wearing red/pink, having silent moments, used subtitles
Favorite part?: Glitch effects during parts when she’s frustrated—especially the part where it cuts to her screaming.
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: I would edit different music to fit the vibe and make it quieter
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some clips felt slightly drawn out or repetitive.
Film maker?: Gabriella Thomas
Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Everything filmed outside, always moving
Favorite part?: Her sitting drinking water from different angles at the start
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Adding music to background, reshooting some shots that you can see the shadow of the camera
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Nothing felt too long or short
Film maker?: Tyler Lucas
Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Sentences run through google translate, cannot smile, mostly makes eye contact constantly
Favorite part?: Cooking the bread & writing the note without looking
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Re edit to be completely black & white and reshoot to keep the eye contact
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Text slides were too short sometimes
Film maker?: Antonia Valeri
Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Fourth wall break
Favorite part?: I liked the fourth wall break when she speaks to the camera
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: I would re edit the text to be more consistent in location and size
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some shots felt like they went on a little too long
Film maker?: Lily Clifford
Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Black and white, only one part narrated, 360 shot
Favorite part?: When she kept checking to make sure her assignment submitted
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Music felt too loud
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some clips felt like they dragged on
Film maker?: Murro Gill
Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Old film aesthetic, copyright free aesthetic music that fit the vibe, title cards instead of dialogue like a silent film
Favorite part?: Sped up clip of the cat cleaning herself
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Try to find different, less cliche music
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some title cards were too short to read
Film maker?: Aileena Sargeant
Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Uneasy narration, dancing with only legs
Favorite part?: When the guy kept bringing up Sabrina Carpenter
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Redo some shots to be more zoomed in and intense
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Paced good
Film maker?: Bekzod Nurboev
Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Filmed outside, eyes are always closed, uses a prop
Favorite part?: When the actor uses the stick as a phone
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Remix audio to not fade in and out with each cut
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Paced good
Film maker?: Nada Almatani
Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Subtitles, black&white, text-to-speech narration, hats in comedic way, doing something wrong
Favorite part?: Watching her struggle with the apron
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Re edit the lightning as some shots are very dark, and turn volume of narration up
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Clips were paced very well, entire video was slightly too long as a whole
Film maker?: Sid Crabtree
Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Blank background, voiceover, exactly 3 minutes
Favorite part?: Dancing scene and whatever was after that
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: Re mix audio to get rid of background noise
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Some clips dragged slightly, overall paced well for 3 mins
Film maker?: Saomi Jimenez
Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Black and white, voiceover(?)
Favorite part?: I liked her explaining what she was doing
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: N/A
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Pacing was good, kept my attention
Film maker?: Noah Schardt
Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: No objects, sound effect, non dominant hand, no front-facing shots
Favorite part?: The actor pretending to gold without a club or ball
What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: N/A
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: Pacing was good
Kayla Bowman
The video does follow the obstructions
I really liked the product placement of the video
I would add more product placement throughout the video
The video was paced well
Noah Schardt- Video Critique
The rules were followed
I like that the video is about a golfer
I would not change anything
I think the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short
Saomi Jimenez- Video Critique
The rules were followed
I like the narration
I would slow down the text
I think the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short
Gaige Stebler- Video Critique
The rules were followed
I like the narration
I would not change anything
I think the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short
Nikayla Haynes
The video does follow the obstructions
I liked the ascetic of the video
I would reshoot when he opens the computer so there is a game up
The video was paced well
Sid Crabtree- Video Critique
The rules were followed
I like the simplicity of the video
Add dialogue in the last clip
I think the video was placed well, no it was not too long or short
Nada Almatani- Video Critique
The rules were followed well
I like the camera angles
Make the dialogue a little louder
I think the video was placed well, the video was a little long
