11 Replies to “The Perfect Human – Dillon DeSantis”
Whose Film: Dillon
Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
– Minimum of 12 different backgrounds, 8-second clips
What was your favorite part of the video?
– I liked the addition of the music and how it cuts out at points.
What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
– I would have a lower audio playing
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
– I think it was well-paced. I really enjoyed it.
The rules were followed somewhat. It went over the time limit and didn’t have 3 people. My favorite part of the video is when the music cuts out. It adds a dramatic effect to the movie and makes a point. I would reshoot with 3 people. The video was paced well but was over the time limit.
Some of the rules were followed. My favorite part was the character walking. If anything I would’ve taken out the shot of the back yard because I feel like that didn’t add anything to the video. I think the video was paced well, good job!
Most of the rules were followed except the soft music – the music was the opposite of soft. The acting was actually pretty good and I liked the other language (Italian?). Make it shorter, add other people, take a little more creative license. Honestly I liked the choppiness of it. The short segments worked for you. But I would definitely change the music though.
The rules weren’t followed, but overall, it was presented well. My favorite part was the eating at-the-table portion. I think transitions could have benefited the video. The video was a bit long, but overall, it turned out good.
Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?:
– It needed more actors but that’s the only rule that wasn’t followed
What was your favorite part of the video?
– That the actor is actually speaking a different language
What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
– There was a part that cut off to the next section too quick
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
– Yes, it was paced well
Other then not following the one rule, this was well executed. I liked it.
Whose film Dillon
Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
No, only because he didn’t have 3 people in the film
What was your favorite part of the video?
Speaking a different language
What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?
Make it more stylized; framing
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
Seemed like it dragged just a little bit
-Not all of the rules were followed, but it got the bulk of it
-I liked the use of an older man, since the original has an older man, it works well.
– I would turn down the music a little bit so it isn’t so distracting
– The video was paced well, and each scene was unique, just like the original.
The three people rules was not followed, however, I think the one person provided enough versatility.
I liked the part where the music turned off and the man popped back up on screen when the music started again.
I think a “landscape” layout would elevate the video.
The pacing of the video was very similar to the original film, very well done!
Were the rules of the obstruction followed effectively?
– Yes. We had multiple locations and shots, and they worked well
What was your favorite part of the video?
– When the perfect human spoke. His dialogue was preformed very well! The subtitles are also nice. They give off TikTok/YouTube Shorts vibes.
What would you reshoot, reedit, etc.?
– I can’t think of anything
Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or short?
– Aside from one shot of just the yard, everything felt well paced.
Whose Film: Dillon
Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
– Minimum of 12 different backgrounds, 8-second clips
What was your favorite part of the video?
– I liked the addition of the music and how it cuts out at points.
What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
– I would have a lower audio playing
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
– I think it was well-paced. I really enjoyed it.
The rules were followed somewhat. It went over the time limit and didn’t have 3 people. My favorite part of the video is when the music cuts out. It adds a dramatic effect to the movie and makes a point. I would reshoot with 3 people. The video was paced well but was over the time limit.
Some of the rules were followed. My favorite part was the character walking. If anything I would’ve taken out the shot of the back yard because I feel like that didn’t add anything to the video. I think the video was paced well, good job!
Most of the rules were followed except the soft music – the music was the opposite of soft. The acting was actually pretty good and I liked the other language (Italian?). Make it shorter, add other people, take a little more creative license. Honestly I liked the choppiness of it. The short segments worked for you. But I would definitely change the music though.
The rules weren’t followed, but overall, it was presented well. My favorite part was the eating at-the-table portion. I think transitions could have benefited the video. The video was a bit long, but overall, it turned out good.
Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?:
– It needed more actors but that’s the only rule that wasn’t followed
What was your favorite part of the video?
– That the actor is actually speaking a different language
What would you re: edit, shoot, etc.?
– There was a part that cut off to the next section too quick
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
– Yes, it was paced well
Other then not following the one rule, this was well executed. I liked it.
Whose film Dillon
Were the rules for the obstruction followed effectively?
No, only because he didn’t have 3 people in the film
What was your favorite part of the video?
Speaking a different language
What would you re: edit, shoot, etc?
Make it more stylized; framing
Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?
Seemed like it dragged just a little bit
-Not all of the rules were followed, but it got the bulk of it
-I liked the use of an older man, since the original has an older man, it works well.
– I would turn down the music a little bit so it isn’t so distracting
– The video was paced well, and each scene was unique, just like the original.
The three people rules was not followed, however, I think the one person provided enough versatility.
I liked the part where the music turned off and the man popped back up on screen when the music started again.
I think a “landscape” layout would elevate the video.
The pacing of the video was very similar to the original film, very well done!
Were the rules of the obstruction followed effectively?
– Yes. We had multiple locations and shots, and they worked well
What was your favorite part of the video?
– When the perfect human spoke. His dialogue was preformed very well! The subtitles are also nice. They give off TikTok/YouTube Shorts vibes.
What would you reshoot, reedit, etc.?
– I can’t think of anything
Was the video well paced? Did any parts feel too long or short?
– Aside from one shot of just the yard, everything felt well paced.