{"id":17105,"date":"2026-05-06T17:39:33","date_gmt":"2026-05-06T21:39:33","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=17105"},"modified":"2026-05-06T17:39:33","modified_gmt":"2026-05-06T21:39:33","slug":"jimenez-finals-critique-notes","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=17105","title":{"rendered":"Jimenez Finals Critique Notes"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Lily<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Timing of dialogue\/pacing of plot. 4th wall break<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: Upload format, wish it were full screen (landscape shot, but uploaded vertically)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Gabby<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Angles\/shots well executed<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: I wish the environmental sounds were louder\/clearer.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Muro<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Sound design and mixed media use, emotional appeal<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would Change: Top-down angle takes a second to get used to<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Aileena<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Interactiveness, I like that the viewer can look anywhere with the 360 footage.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: Add background music to boost the emotional aspect.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Chrystian<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Game rules. mechanics, and objectives are executed well<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: Add sound design<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Nikayla<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Sense of relatability and being human, clock overlay<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: More shot\/angle variety<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Antonia<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Sound design. characters<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: Green screen effect could be less clunky<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Ethan<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Smooth animation, great light design<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: Process was rather unorthodox, seemed to lack some planning<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Tyler<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Smooth animation\/transition between character movements, great projection<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: Need better camera setup<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Bekzod<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Interactiveness\/audience participation, creative concept<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: Reel version<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Sara<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Great lighting and camera work, preparations &amp; planning<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: Music choice<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Sid:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Great craftsmanship<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: Adjust framerate\/speed<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Noah<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Art style and music choice<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change:&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Gaige<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Excellent narrative and creative solution<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: Speaking audio quality<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Nada<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Interactivity<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: Rule clarity<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Kayla<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Transitions, lighting, and sound design<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: Posters feel a bit out of place in the art style<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Gavin<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Works: Color grading, camer control<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Would change: Walking sound plays when the character\/camera is still<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Lily Works: Timing of dialogue\/pacing of plot. 4th wall break Would change: Upload format, wish it were full screen (landscape shot, but uploaded vertically) Gabby Works: Angles\/shots well executed Would change: I wish the environmental sounds were louder\/clearer. Muro Works: Sound design and mixed media use, emotional appeal Would Change: Top-down angle takes a second &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=17105\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;Jimenez Finals Critique Notes&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":311,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[120],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-17105","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-4d-studio"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/17105","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/311"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=17105"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/17105\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":17106,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/17105\/revisions\/17106"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=17105"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=17105"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=17105"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}