Lilly Clifford <\/p>\n\n\n\n
One thing that works: <\/mark>the timing of the conversation was well paced. <\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> potentially move the angle over a bit to refrain from the glare on the camera.<\/p>\n\n\n\n Gabriella Thomas<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> im not sure if this was meant to be some sort of thriller but the silence gave the video an eerie feeling.<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> the close up shot with the coffee cup before walking away should have been slightly trimmed to prevent seeing it be picked up again <\/p>\n\n\n\n Murro Gill<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works:<\/mark> the sound effects were very soothing.<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> there were a few shots where your finger came into view but weren\u2019t extremely distracting <\/p>\n\n\n\n Aileena Sargeant <\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> the still shots were fascinating<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> im sure this happened when uploading the video\/rmu wifi but the quality was a bit grainy <\/p>\n\n\n\n Guy in the wife beater🧍🏽♀️<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> both the color scheme and quality of the game itself look great <\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> possibly add a clear objective\/goal to the game <\/p>\n\n\n\n Antonia Valeri<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> I love that the idea was a person shrinking into a doll house while using the house from coraline <\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> the green screen cut out quite a bit but overall this was great <\/p>\n\n\n\n Ethan Bookbinder<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> the lighting matching on both the photo and the background page worked really well<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> i have no recommendations, s\/o jjk<\/p>\n\n\n\n Tyler Lucas <\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> the projection\/stop motion worked out really well<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> possibly framing the projection a bit more <\/p>\n\n\n\n Bekzod Nurboev<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> I like that we were made to scroll the projection on our own phones, very interactive <\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> rather than leaving it as photos alone possibly turn them into a stop motion video <\/p>\n\n\n\n Sara Krim<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> the music change used to build up the suspension was amazing.<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> I think possibly making the light fade back to the regular kind would\u2019ve made it seamless <\/p>\n\n\n\n Saomi Jimenez <\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> the drawings were very cute & because I\u2019ve seen the trend it\u2019s very fitting<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> possibly move the song credits out the way <\/p>\n\n\n\n Sidney Crabtree<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> the outer rims movement was quite mesmerizing <\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> the inner rims movement makes the images loose detail very easily <\/p>\n\n\n\n Noah Schardt<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> the incorporation of animation and real world visuals went together extremely well<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> no complaints I loved this<\/p>\n\n\n\n Gaige Stebler<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> the animation at the beginning was quite smooth, sid dancing was my favorite part<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> the baby audio could have been slightly turned down <\/p>\n\n\n\n Nada Almatani<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> the graphic quality on this video look really nice <\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> the rules were a bit confusing at first but after testing it\u2019s cool<\/p>\n\n\n\n Kayla Bowman<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> the lighting tracked very well with the door being opened <\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> possibly try white text <\/p>\n\n\n\n Gavin Raabe<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that works: <\/mark> the hand in frame like old indie games was a nice touch<\/p>\n\n\n\n One thing that doesn\u2019t:<\/mark> the walking audio could have been synced a bit better<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":" Lilly Clifford One thing that works: the timing of the conversation was well paced. One thing that doesn\u2019t: potentially move the angle over a bit to refrain from the glare on the camera. Gabriella Thomas One thing that works: im not sure if this was meant to be some sort of thriller but the silence gave the video … <\/p>\n