{"id":17091,"date":"2026-05-08T18:17:59","date_gmt":"2026-05-08T22:17:59","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=17091"},"modified":"2026-05-08T18:17:59","modified_gmt":"2026-05-08T22:17:59","slug":"4d-final-critiques-murro-gill","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=17091","title":{"rendered":"4D Final Critiques &#8211; Murro Gill"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Lily Clifford<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: The lighting really adds the suspense feeling to the film<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: The echo is a little distracting, I would try and change how the audio came out.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Gabby<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: The angles and scenery really makes the video feel cozy.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: The pacing is on the slower side, so I would try to get quicker and smaller shots to combine.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Aileena Sargeant<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: It feels like im on the motorcycle looking around<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: The camera is very shaky and the quality kinda deprives the experience<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Christian&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: Battle Block Theatre really gives the game a personality<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: there&#8217;s 2 points with the crown square things(?) so i feel like it would be cool to only have 1 point to stay on.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Nikayla Haynes<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: The lighting looks really good when the curtains close<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: Watching the laptop load got a little tiring<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Toni<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: The overlay matches with the background very smoothly (closing the door, playing the piano, etc.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change There are some parts where her pants fade into the background<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Ethan<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: The lighting really works well<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: The camera at the beginning moves a little bit, a steadier tripod would probably fix it<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Bekzod<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: Very unique idea, plays off of the perfect human<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: A lot of the photos look the same\/repetitive<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Sara<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: The camera focus and quality of production is really nice, the music is the cherry on top<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: More emotion from the actor would add more to the story<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Saomi<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: The explanations really add a whole new impact to it<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: Add mini blurbs to the video so you would have to explain less<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Sid<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: Zoetrope style works really well<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: Adding music or changing the camera angle would&#8217;ve added more to the video<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Noah<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: The mix of real life and animation was very cute<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: some camera movements moved the animation and it made a weird misplacement effect<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Gaige<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: The stop motion animation to video transition was cool<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: The audio volume was very different at times<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Jana<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: The sheet of numbers with the dice animation was neat<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: The rules were very confusing, but I didn&#8217;t fully understand it<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Kayla<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing that works: The story is heartwarming<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">1 thing I would change: I would&#8217;ve loved to see more to the animation<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Lily Clifford 1 thing that works: The lighting really adds the suspense feeling to the film 1 thing I would change: The echo is a little distracting, I would try and change how the audio came out. Gabby 1 thing that works: The angles and scenery really makes the video feel cozy. 1 thing I &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=17091\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;4D Final Critiques &#8211; Murro Gill&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":309,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[120],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-17091","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-4d-studio"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/17091","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/309"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=17091"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/17091\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":17092,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/17091\/revisions\/17092"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=17091"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=17091"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=17091"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}