{"id":17088,"date":"2026-05-06T17:37:17","date_gmt":"2026-05-06T21:37:17","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=17088"},"modified":"2026-05-06T17:37:17","modified_gmt":"2026-05-06T21:37:17","slug":"4d-final-critiques","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=17088","title":{"rendered":"4D Final Critiques"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>LILY CLIFFORD<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Use of light as a prop, humor, timing<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Take more advantage of the light and have it be used more\/play a bigger role. Audio quality wasn\u2019t the best.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>GABBY THOMAS<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Different angles and shots. Good audio for the environmental sound effects<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Lack of voiceover\/audio made it a bit boring. Some shots went on too long. Looking at the camera broke immersion.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>MURRO GILL<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Storytelling, stop-motion, emotional appeal, different medias, sound effects &amp; music<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Transitions with paper was blurry, tripod seen in some scenes, pacing was a little fast<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>AILEENA SARGEANT<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: 360 shot is very cool, lighting in photos is very nice, Perks of Being A Wallflower reference<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Audio is loud and slightly distracting<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>CHRISTIAN<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Concept, executed theme &amp; obstructions well, flash game vibes<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Gameplay &amp; objective feels lacking<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>NIKAYLA HAYNES<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Good acting, camera angles, relatable concept, clock effect, ending note &amp; bloopers were funny<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Video too long, music got repetitive<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>ANTONIA VALERI<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Concept, editing, interacting with environment, the \u201ccat\u201d, sound effects with piano, humor<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Green screen effect cutting off legs, sometimes Toni wasn\u2019t proportional to the rest of the house<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>TYLER LUCAS<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Stop motion, concept, different sprites<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Projected image covered Mario when climbing the ladder<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>BEKZOD N<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Concept is very unique and interactive. Plays well into the irony of being a social media account when the subject is doomscrolling.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Having an easier way to engage with it, could be longer<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>SARA KRIM<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Great camera quality &amp; angles, lighting change with actor\u2019s emotions<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Pacing felt a little slow &amp; repetitive, music didn\u2019t really fit the first half<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>SAOMI JIMENEZ<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Many different mediums of 4D, loved the trend, good concept, personally significant<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Not super engaging<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>SID CRABTREE<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Concept of combining things that he loved. Rotoscope works very well.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Could have 3D aspects to make it more interesting. Fix frame rates.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>NOAH SCHARDT<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Mix of IRL &amp; animation, music fits vibe<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Consistency in hand-drawn elements.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>GAIGE STEBLER<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Transitions of a child growing up was smooth. Turning a software problem into something comedic was a good way to make light of a bad situation<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Audio is loud, animation is shaky.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>JANA<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Unique idea, some results are very funny, engaging\/interactive<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Could use real dice, don\u2019t fully understand the objective.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>KAYLA BOWMAN<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: Animation, use of lighting in animation, emotional appeal, audio<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Too short, left wanting more.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>GAVIN RAABE<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>WORKS: First person POV works well, reminds me of a point-and-click game. Use of greyscale helps set the mood, sound effects<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>DOESN\u2019T: Audio too loud, walking sound is repetitive<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>LILY CLIFFORD WORKS: Use of light as a prop, humor, timing DOESN\u2019T: Take more advantage of the light and have it be used more\/play a bigger role. Audio quality wasn\u2019t the best. GABBY THOMAS WORKS: Different angles and shots. Good audio for the environmental sound effects DOESN\u2019T: Lack of voiceover\/audio made it a bit boring. &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=17088\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;4D Final Critiques&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":306,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-17088","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/17088","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/306"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=17088"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/17088\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":17097,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/17088\/revisions\/17097"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=17088"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=17088"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=17088"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}