{"id":17039,"date":"2026-05-06T15:40:40","date_gmt":"2026-05-06T19:40:40","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=17039"},"modified":"2026-05-06T17:36:48","modified_gmt":"2026-05-06T21:36:48","slug":"lily-final","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=17039","title":{"rendered":"Final Critiques- Antonia Valeri"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Lily:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: The use of light and the forth wall break<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Change: Actors <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Gabby:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: use of obstructions with the video<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>change: background noise was a little distracting<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Muro :<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: sound effects for the stop motion<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>change: just getting ride of extra shadows<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Aileena: <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: I like how you can move the camera because it was filmed with the 360 camera <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Change: played with the audio a little more<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Chrystian:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: very user friendly<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Change: change the background when the instructions pop up, so it is easier to read<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Nikayla:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: I liked the use of overlaying the clock with the game play<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Change: I would change the timing on logging into the assignment <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Ethan: <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: the light really brings the photos to life<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Change: audio added Screen <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Tyler:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: the projection was good<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Change: get a tripod<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Beckzod:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good:the concept of actually doom scrolling <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Change: make a stop motion with the photos<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Sara:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: the different camera angles were good<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Change: the lighting <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Saomie:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: very good use of the characters <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Change: the background if you change anything <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Sid:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: I like the concept <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Change: the Frame rates<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Noah:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: I like the multimedia use of this project <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Change: keep the drawing consistent <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Gage:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: the animation style was very unique <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>change: would love to see more animation <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><br>Kayla: <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: the lighting transitions were good<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Change: draw the posters to match the rest of the animation <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Gavin:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Good: I like the concept <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Change the walking sound to only when the character is walking<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Lily: Good: The use of light and the forth wall break Change: Actors Gabby: Good: use of obstructions with the video change: background noise was a little distracting Muro : Good: sound effects for the stop motion change: just getting ride of extra shadows Aileena: Good: I like how you can move the camera because &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=17039\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;Final Critiques- Antonia Valeri&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":317,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-17039","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/17039","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/317"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=17039"}],"version-history":[{"count":10,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/17039\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":17095,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/17039\/revisions\/17095"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=17039"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=17039"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=17039"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}