{"id":16616,"date":"2026-04-07T14:05:39","date_gmt":"2026-04-07T18:05:39","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=16616"},"modified":"2026-04-07T14:05:39","modified_gmt":"2026-04-07T18:05:39","slug":"the-perfect-human-critiques","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=16616","title":{"rendered":"The Perfect Human Critiques"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Film Maker: Nikayla Haynes<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Rules followed noticeably\/effectively: The angles worked really well, and the 15 second rule was noticeable.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Favorite Part: The double takes at the facial parts<br>What I would remake: I would add more to the outside parts, because there weren&#8217;t many outside shots.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Video Pace: Really good, well paced and made the 3 minute mark.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Film Maker: Kayla Bowman<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Rules followed noticeably\/effectively: The subtitles were good, I could see the rule about wearing pink\/red clearly<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Favorite Part: The what to wear scenes were really good<br>What I would remake: The mirror in the back showed Kayla throwing the clothes into the scene, I didn&#8217;t know if it was meant to be on purpose or not<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Video Pace: It was really well paced, the human was trying to get ready the whole time.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Film Maker: Gabriella Thomas<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Rules followed noticeably\/effectively: During the chair scene, she was only moving 1 part of her body.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Favorite Part: The water bottle at the beginning was really interesting to look at. It was confusing at first, but really cool.<br>What I would remake: The shadow of the camera was in the video.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Video Pace: It was paced well, but a little slow.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Film Maker: Ethan Bookbinder<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Rules followed noticeably\/effectively: the static shots are really well done.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Favorite Part: I really liked the last part with the editing<br>What I would remake: I\u2019d put the title card at the beginning instead of the end.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Video Pace: Really well paced, a little fast but still paced good.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Film Maker: Tyler Lucas<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Rules followed noticeably\/effectively: Eye contact, not below the waist, and google translated well.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Favorite Part: Dead eye contact<br>What I would remake: I saw a few times that the perfect man smiled<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Video Pace: Really good, a little long.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Film Maker: Antonia Valeri<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Rules followed noticeably\/effectively: The 4th wall break was good.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Favorite Part: The fourth wall break<br>What I would remake: I would change the font, it was nice but a bit hard to read.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Video Pace: It was well paced<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Film Maker: Lily Clifford<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Rules followed noticeably\/effectively: the 360 shot was nice, it brought me to the perspective of Lily.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Favorite Part: The repetition for ocd was really interesting&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>What I would remake: The audio balance with the running water<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Video Pace: Well paced but ended abruptly<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Film Maker: Aileena Sargeant<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Rules followed noticeably\/effectively: The uneasy narration was really clear, and worked well. The dancing was really funny<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Favorite Part: The narration<br>What I would remake: I couldn&#8217;t tell right away who was being narrated<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Video Pace: Very well paced<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Film Maker: Bekzod Nurboev<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Rules followed noticeably\/effectively: She never opened her eyes, the one prop was really noticeable.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Favorite Part: The communication with a stick was funny, the dedication to that stick was strong.<br>What I would remake: The audio cuts were a little distracting<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Video Pace: Good pace<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Film Maker: Nada Almatani<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Rules followed noticeably\/effectively: the 2 hats stayed on, it was really odd and it worked.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Favorite Part: All of it was really good, I really liked when the text contradicted what she did.<br>What I would remake: Add music, and make the voice over a bit louder.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Video Pace: A little long<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Film Maker: Sid Crabtree<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Rules followed noticeably\/effectively: The background rule really makes it like the original perfect human.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Favorite Part: I really liked how it reminded me of the original perfect human.<br>What I would remake: The flash transition was a little distracting.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Video Pace: Really well paced<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Film Maker: Nikayla Haynes Rules followed noticeably\/effectively: The angles worked really well, and the 15 second rule was noticeable. Favorite Part: The double takes at the facial partsWhat I would remake: I would add more to the outside parts, because there weren&#8217;t many outside shots. 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