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Film maker?:<\/strong> Mikayla Haynes<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: <\/strong>Different camera shots, dialogue, and clips exceeding 15 seconds.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Favorite part?: <\/strong>Enjoyed the editing on the closeups on the face and how some clips would repeat.
<\/strong>What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: <\/strong>I would remix the audio and reshoot some things to have the camera be more still.
<\/strong>Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: <\/strong>Everything felt properly paced\u2014nothing was too quick or went on too long.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Film maker?: <\/strong>Kayla Bowman<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: <\/strong>Wearing red\/pink, having silent moments, used subtitles<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Favorite part?: <\/strong>Glitch effects during parts when she\u2019s frustrated\u2014especially the part where it cuts to her screaming.
<\/strong>What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: <\/strong>I would edit different music to fit the vibe and make it quieter
<\/strong>Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: <\/strong>Some clips felt slightly drawn out or repetitive.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Film maker?: <\/strong>Gabriella Thomas<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: <\/strong>Everything filmed outside, always moving<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Favorite part?: <\/strong>Her sitting drinking water from different angles at the start
<\/strong>What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: <\/strong>Adding music to background, reshooting some shots that you can see the shadow of the camera
<\/strong>Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: <\/strong>Nothing felt too long or short<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Film maker?: <\/strong>Tyler Lucas<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: <\/strong>Sentences run through google translate, cannot smile, mostly makes eye contact constantly<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Favorite part?: <\/strong>Cooking the bread & writing the note without looking
<\/strong>What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: <\/strong>Re edit to be completely black & white and reshoot to keep the eye contact
<\/strong>Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: <\/strong>Text slides were too short sometimes<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Film maker?: <\/strong>Antonia Valeri<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: <\/strong>Fourth wall break<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Favorite part?: <\/strong>I liked the fourth wall break when she speaks to the camera
<\/strong>What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: <\/strong>I would re edit the text to be more consistent in location and size
<\/strong>Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: <\/strong>Some shots felt like they went on a little too long<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Film maker?: <\/strong>Lily Clifford<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: <\/strong>Black and white, only one part narrated, 360 shot<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Favorite part?: <\/strong>When she kept checking to make sure her assignment submitted
<\/strong>What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: <\/strong>Music felt too loud
<\/strong>Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: <\/strong>Some clips felt like they dragged on<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Film maker?: <\/strong>Murro Gill<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: <\/strong>Old film aesthetic, copyright free aesthetic music that fit the vibe, title cards instead of dialogue like a silent film<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Favorite part?: <\/strong>Sped up clip of the cat cleaning herself
<\/strong>What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: <\/strong>Try to find different, less cliche music
<\/strong>Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: <\/strong>Some title cards were too short to read<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Film maker?: <\/strong>Aileena Sargeant<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: <\/strong>Uneasy narration, dancing with only legs<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Favorite part?: <\/strong>When the guy kept bringing up Sabrina Carpenter
<\/strong>What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: <\/strong> Redo some shots to be more zoomed in and intense
<\/strong>Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: <\/strong>Paced good<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Film maker?: <\/strong>Bekzod Nurboev<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: <\/strong>Filmed outside, eyes are always closed, uses a prop<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Favorite part?: <\/strong>When the actor uses the stick as a phone
<\/strong>What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: <\/strong>Remix audio to not fade in and out with each cut
<\/strong>Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: <\/strong>Paced good<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Film maker?: <\/strong>Nada Almatani<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: <\/strong>Subtitles, black&white, text-to-speech narration, hats in comedic way, doing something wrong<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Favorite part?: <\/strong>Watching her struggle with the apron
<\/strong>What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: <\/strong>Re edit the lightning as some shots are very dark, and turn volume of narration up
<\/strong>Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: <\/strong>Clips were paced very well, entire video was slightly too long as a whole<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Film maker?: <\/strong>Sid Crabtree<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: <\/strong>Blank background, voiceover, exactly 3 minutes<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Favorite part?: <\/strong>Dancing scene and whatever was after that<\/p>\n\n\n\n

What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: <\/strong>Re mix audio to get rid of background noise
<\/strong>Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: <\/strong>Some clips dragged slightly, overall paced well for 3 mins<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Film maker?: <\/strong>Saomi Jimenez<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: <\/strong>Black and white, voiceover(?)<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Favorite part?: <\/strong>I liked her explaining what she was doing
<\/strong>What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: <\/strong>N\/A
<\/strong>Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: <\/strong>Pacing was good, kept my attention<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Film maker?:<\/strong> Noah Schardt<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: <\/strong>No objects, sound effect, non dominant hand, no front-facing shots<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Favorite part?:<\/strong> The actor pretending to gold without a club or ball
<\/strong>What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: <\/strong>N\/A
<\/strong>Was the video paced well? Did any parts feel too long or too short?: <\/strong>Pacing was good<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

Film maker?: Mikayla Haynes Were the rules for the obstruction followed noticeably and effectively?: Different camera shots, dialogue, and clips exceeding 15 seconds. Favorite part?: Enjoyed the editing on the closeups on the face and how some clips would repeat.What would you re: edit, shoot, mix, record, etc?: I would remix the audio and reshoot … <\/p>\n

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