{"id":16448,"date":"2026-04-01T16:19:46","date_gmt":"2026-04-01T20:19:46","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=16448"},"modified":"2026-04-01T21:37:22","modified_gmt":"2026-04-02T01:37:22","slug":"video-critique-notes","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/rmu.andrewyames.com\/?p=16448","title":{"rendered":"Video Critique Notes"},"content":{"rendered":"\n

Mcayla Haynes<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Yes, the rules were done correctly and consistently.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

It’s hard to tell I enjoyed the whole thing, but I would say the whole insight into this person’s life and the lighting changes when we were in this person’s apartment. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

More focus to the face when describing the human face.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Nothing felt too long or to short.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Kayla Bowmen<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Yes the rules were made as followed<\/p>\n\n\n\n

the cuts to how she felt while putting on her make-up. You get a sense of anxiety and emotion and the need to be perfect. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

The hue of the video through me off to yellowish.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

The video was very well paced. not oversimulating.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Ethan Bookbinder<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Very creepy. Gave a backrooms vibe.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

When all the faces became blurry<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Make the video longer only 1:47 seconds.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

video was paced very well for being shorter.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Lucas<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Very consistent he did smile once and it wasn’t fully black and white.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Him trying not to smile and him playing ping pong.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

fix the black and white<\/p>\n\n\n\n

the video was very paced, nothing felt too short or too long.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Antonia Valeri<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

rules were followed perfectly.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Us seeing her through the mirror, breaking the 4th wall.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Fix the text, hard to read. Text should be in the same place throughout the film.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Video was well paced.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Lily Clifford<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

video followed rules to the tea<\/p>\n\n\n\n

I also have minor symptoms of OCD and ADD so it felt relatible<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Shot pretty well<\/p>\n\n\n\n

no scene was to fast or slow =. paced very well\\<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Murro Chill<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Executed very well cat was cute!<\/p>\n\n\n\n

the cat scratching, gave me a good laugh<\/p>\n\n\n\n

the video felt a little short. could make it longer.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Scenes felt a little short got a little over stimulated.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Aileena sargeant<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

followed rules almost perfect. wasn’t making anyone uncomfortable<\/p>\n\n\n\n

The dance and the voice over<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Add some more elements to make more unsettling. Whether it’s making scene black and white or changing voiceover<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Video well paced<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Unknown name<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Rules were as followed<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Using the stick as a phone<\/p>\n\n\n\n

removing the shaving butter.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Video was paced very well.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Nada Almatani<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Rules were followed perfectly felt very odd.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Her putting on the apron wrong, and how everything felt just a little sped up.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Make video shorter by a min. ran to long.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Video paced very well.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Sid Crabtree<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

He completed his rules.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

How he looked confused as if he didn’t know why he was there.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

The static in the background was distracting. Try to edit that out.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Video was paced well.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Gage<\/strong> <\/p>\n\n\n\n

He followed his rules.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Him filling up the water bottle.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Make scenes a little longer. him writing on the paper would’ve made a good ending. I thought that was the end sequence.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Some scenes felt a little rushed especially around the beginning.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Sayome jimez<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

She followed her rules. looked like a tik tok!!<\/p>\n\n\n\n

The whole video was shot very well. felt very modern.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Video was well made.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Everything was well paced.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Noah Schar<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Followed his rules.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Him dancing around the yard.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Just put the text around lockers.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Video was well paced.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Mcayla Haynes Yes, the rules were done correctly and consistently. It’s hard to tell I enjoyed the whole thing, but I would say the whole insight into this person’s life and the lighting changes when we were in this person’s apartment. More focus to the face when describing the human face. Nothing felt too long … <\/p>\n

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